Maitraya

male LV 2
2022-09-07 加入 United States
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徽章 4

Moments 62
Maitraya
Maitraya
1 years ago
Replied to Vainglory0

Thank you! I have every intention of finishing the series.

Maitraya
Maitraya
1 years ago
Replied to Vainglory0

Thank you for the kind review! Im currently busy with exam finals this week, which explains the unstable uploads. Chapters will be released every thursday and monday starting this week!

Maitraya
Maitraya
1 years ago
Posted

The intial 5 chapters serve as a good prologue to seeting up the background of the story, as well as add an air of mystery to the MC. Besides some minor tense issues and various errors in grammar, its a solid read. I’d give it a 4/5

Maitraya
Maitraya
1 years ago
Commented

Good start to the series. It presents the audience with a good impression of both the MC and the background of the world. Good hook.

Maitraya
Maitraya
1 years ago
Commented

So the blood goop stuff brings out his violent impulses?

The moment he lost contact with it, he felt a wave of calm wash over him, dissipating the remaining excitement of the deathmatch.

Lord of Mysteries 2: Circle of Inevitability

Lord of Mysteries 2: Circle of Inevitability

ファンタジー · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving

Maitraya
Maitraya
1 years ago
Commented

YEOOOOOOO ITS HERE

They resembled fireflies, gradually converging towards a single spot in an unyielding fashion.

Lord of Mysteries 2: Circle of Inevitability

Lord of Mysteries 2: Circle of Inevitability

ファンタジー · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving

Maitraya
Maitraya
1 years ago
Commented

CAN HE CONTROL MONSTERS?

The beast was squatting nearby, half-human and half-beast, with its head drooping and its arms outstretched in front of it.

Lord of Mysteries 2: Circle of Inevitability

Lord of Mysteries 2: Circle of Inevitability

ファンタジー · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving

Maitraya
Maitraya
1 years ago
Commented

This monster is tough, but lumian’s intuition will win

The monster hadn't chased after him, instead choosing to body-slam into the obstacles in its way.

Lord of Mysteries 2: Circle of Inevitability

Lord of Mysteries 2: Circle of Inevitability

ファンタジー · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving

Maitraya
Maitraya
Maitraya
1 years ago
Commented

We’re gettin there

"Aurore, uh, Grande Soeur, is Beyonder a term for people with superpowers?"

Lord of Mysteries 2: Circle of Inevitability

Lord of Mysteries 2: Circle of Inevitability

ファンタジー · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving

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