clairvoyantviceral

clairvoyantviceral

female LV 3

I'm really funny but I try to be normal. lol email for chat- awritersparade@gmail.com work and contract purposes - myfrequency24@gmail.com

2022-08-14 加入 India
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clairvoyantviceral
clairvoyantviceral
9 months ago
Commented

interesting. i have a question. does water usually need impurities to be deprived of it? or is it like a figure of speech.

[Clear like water, deprived of any impurities.

Library of Heaven's Path

Library of Heaven's Path

Eastern · Heng Sao Tian Ya

clairvoyantviceral
clairvoyantviceral
1 years ago
Commented

whys he younger now and is he suddenly given a chance at cultivating things he couldn't during his early age; meaning when he was younger he lacked the experiences that his present self "A God" would require so he sort of moved back into age so he could learn them?

It would feel weird to cultivate with mortal girls in their teens, but he also understood that he was not in a situation he could be picky in, as no one in his prefered age category would even look at him right now, much less cultivate together.

Dual Cultivation God Returns

Dual Cultivation God Returns

Eastern · DaoistGreenOnion

clairvoyantviceral
clairvoyantviceral
1 years ago
Commented

I like the way you write. Especially about tobacco being scarce, seems like a realistic imagery as though it's been lived irl. As for this paragraph, its such a sweet and profound character description 😍🤌

clairvoyantviceral
clairvoyantviceral
2 years ago
Commented

I've read until now alot about qi condensation but it doesn't mention anywhere what it means. What is it?

For yellow robes it was a bit different, out of 100 at least 20 would succeed in cultivating as they did not have many chores to handle they spend all day and night trying to cultivate because of that many yellow robes succeeded in reaching at least qi condensation stage.

Transmigrated Scoundrel's Exchange System

Transmigrated Scoundrel's Exchange System

Eastern · Daoist_Drumstick

clairvoyantviceral
clairvoyantviceral
2 years ago
Commented

This is such a well expressed visual imagery about a location existing in diverse backgrounds.

The city also has a strong sense of community and was a melting pot of different cultures and backgrounds. Many of the citizens are from different regions or countries, but they all come together to make the city a vibrant and diverse place.

Transmigrated Scoundrel's Exchange System

Transmigrated Scoundrel's Exchange System

Eastern · Daoist_Drumstick

clairvoyantviceral
clairvoyantviceral
2 years ago
Posted

this has a really nice background plotline considering it contains elements of religious myths. with your own creative manipulation that steers alot of spiritual elements left to right. but i just feel like there's way too many characters and names that i can't seem to remember throughout. for example explaining real life hindu worship elements that have different names to define them. Its like I'm reading someones autobiography, not fantasy fiction. Infact this can be classified a isegai in a much parallel perspective. I like the storyline build up though, maybe try removing namely elements that can confuse readers sometimes. keep it up!

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