friend can you please stop with this kind of chapter it's been a month but I got nothing but chapter with fillers other than his breakthrough. a month 15 chapters and still you are still uploading these chapters
friend can you please stop with this kind of chapter it's been a month but I got nothing but chapter with fillers other than his breakthrough. a month 15 chapters and still you are uploading these chapters.
I will get you guys details about this arround 6p.m. (Indian standard time)
Well this is a nice story and the story it's smooth
because I am working on a novel. and also another fanfiction that I re continued after people told me so I don't get enough time for this one. but I will try to work on this one
Just wait for time. Raynare was a fallen and she was an easy one on other side Rias is different, she is arrogant so will get a different punishment from Raynare
well he doesn't decide his decision yet so please wait
yes I have to work on that but soon there will be
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In a world where magic and science are both existing together and there is a boy who has just started his journey and wants to find his father, but he learns that his father is connected to much bigger things. so will he be able to find out his father's secrets will he be able to find him. You will find out in this story.5 Chs 29 收藏
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look you should speed up your story, because your story was like that before, when you start this the story was progressing very fast but from the last 15 chapter it's very slow and it is very very different from the when you started. and most of the people got used to fast speed. like you didn't show us when he was making progress in his alchemy, array and artifacts refining and you had just skipped all that to fast speed your story but now you are writing the chapter that shows us the problem and solution of a character and take a chapter or two. development of character is good but you should do it in between other events don't take a whole chapter because it's feels like you are stretching the story.
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