See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
I started reading this book because of all the positive reviews. The story seems interesting and has a good pace. However, it is very poorly written, with redundant sentences and whole incomprehensible paragraphs. This makes the story hard to follow and does not help the reading experience in my opinion. I would like to know how the story proceeds, but sadly do not think it’s worth the effort
Twilight reference?
Seeing the man's hand, Madeline finally placed her hand in his hand that appeared to look small compared to his large hand. He clasped her hand, taking her to the dance floor where couples were dancing, and the music out of the blue changed to a much slower and gentle one that had Madeline's eyes turn in the direction of the musicians who had changed the tone of the music.
Fantasy · ash_knight17
I thought George was older than Henry by three years, no? I keep waiting for this to be addressed/explained but nothing
I think Dark Moon city still exists, it’s just its leaders that were killed so the city would probably need to be reconstructed. But the same goes for the city of 10,000 Beasts. Without a king or royal family and after the temple had been demolished, the only thing keeping it the main city was the Prophet’s presence in it. It seems to me she could have just taken the altar statute and moved everything to Rock City. But as you said, at least they’re all happy and can still see eachother
Although the City of 10,000 Beasts was very far away from Nightmare Forest, with the help of the altar, it was very easy to contact Yin Ji. Some of the things that she could not say to the people around her could be told to Yin Ji.
Fantasy · Big Fruit Pellets
Aw I don’t like them having to be separated. Huanhuan should have just moved the divine guards and everything to rock city and not care about what anyone else said. She worked so hard to reunite her family and now it just seems futile. And poor Clement has to live away from his mom 😫 A lot of things just seem unresolved, with discarded characters and important plot points that were just pushed aside to bring this to a quick end
Although the City of 10,000 Beasts was very far away from Nightmare Forest, with the help of the altar, it was very easy to contact Yin Ji. Some of the things that she could not say to the people around her could be told to Yin Ji.
Fantasy · Big Fruit Pellets
So did they move from Rock City to the City of 10,000 Beasts? I’m confused
Although the City of 10,000 Beasts was very far away from Nightmare Forest, with the help of the altar, it was very easy to contact Yin Ji. Some of the things that she could not say to the people around her could be told to Yin Ji.
Fantasy · Big Fruit Pellets
Finally!
Now that Zhi and Yan were dead and the contract between Zhi and Yan and Bai Di had ended, Bai Di could tell him everything that Zhi had shown him in the small inn on the mysterious dragon continent many years ago.
Fantasy · Big Fruit Pellets
Is that the one that led the troops near Rock mountain and was in love with Huanhuan and also knew about Sang Ye being a demon?
Before he decided to destroy the temple, He Zong had already informed his four sons. If he died, He Guang would immediately inherit the throne and lead the royal family to continue the great cause of revitalizing the royal power!
Fantasy · Big Fruit Pellets
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
The Vampire King's Possession
Fantasy · GinaStanley