The author recommends rereading the story and editing it. If you fix everything, you'll get a good story. Thanks for attention.
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This is a story with cultivation, where the heroes usually look for ways to obtain divine (or demonic) power. Reading this story, for some reason I wanted to reread Shall Seal the Heavens. It's facilitated by the unusual pleasant atmosphere prevailing in this story. It is clear that the author tries hard and writes in one breath. Because of this, there are typos and mistake in the text that would be worth editing and correcting in a good way. And despite this, I liked this story! Thank you author! And of course, what kind of story will do without romance... ;) It remains to hope that the FL will find her love.
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Wait a minute, so Rushuang or Rushang... Which of the options is correct?
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I wanted to know why Rushuang is written with a small letter? Is that how it was intended?
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Mom may be the heavenly Empress? Or is it still the emperor...
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A paragraph less than 70 words? Thank you for advice. I'll try to make it.
By the way, is it on purpose to write Xia with a small letter? The rulers from the Xia Dynasty will be very sad. :(
I agree with the previous comment.
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original Heart of Red Dust (GL)
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By pure chance or evil fate, there are two souls marked with stars as "soulmates". They are meant for each other as one, but because of the totalitarian regime and the extreme living conditions on their home planet, such relationships are punishable by death. Only the stars know whether they will be able to find happiness with each other or not… This is a story about the cruel realities of society, which "were", "are" and probably "will be"...7 Chs 39 收藏
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Nocturne for the Witch (GL)
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Lulu studies at the Witch Academy and loves to play the violin. One day she meets a new girl named Sophie on her life path. Lulu helps her in a difficult moment and then befriends her. Only Lulu didn't expect Sophie to be her new alchemy teacher.14 Chs 103 收藏
Thanks. :) I will try to write on time so that the chapters come out often.
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