Can you give it? I'm curious. As far as this translation goes right now the story is fine
I think you confused some mortal with immortal here xD
found it xD it was difficult but I found the source. Just translate the title of this novel to Chinese and search it, you should find the original. Then Google translator for the win if you wanna read xD I haven't found any mtl. Luckily you can translate the page...
someone found the raw? wanna read more xD and also to compare with this translation it is quite well done after all
"yes and the original is in the reviews". that is the translation of that comment
+1
A - keep writing the novel
Anime & Comics · MynameJeff
can you give the source please? :c
該書已被刪除。
it's fine as it is...
please don't drip this one, it's interesting so far and I've seen you abandon the other books you made... so please just continue this one at least...
I tried but it didn't appear :'c what language?
I, Kurumi Tokisaki, Am a Wanderer
Anime & Comics · Dao_Of_Heaven