After reading Chapter 30, I can conclude that the plot is not bad, Although there may be areas that could benefit from further development. Overall if you want to pass your time it's a great story for that.
Thanks for the chapter
"Big" murmured Alex.
Fantasy · Lord_Olethros
He gazed at Hannah's portrait affectionately and mumbled, "Child, you don't have to worry about your son. He has become a fine young man." After staying in the room for a few more minutes, he walked out of the room and closed the door.
Fantasy · Blizzard54k
good chapter
The story is good, hope the author does not stop updating it.Like other novels I've read so far.
God System: The Path Beyond Heavens
Fantasy · Lord_Olethros