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electrik
electrik
electrik
1 months ago
Commented

Wasn't Sirius the first ever to escape from Azkaban in the original?

Harry's laugh was tinged with bitterness. "I wish. From what I know of their methods, they'll just watch and wait. That was their pattern in the last war - Death Eaters would attack, the Order would fight defensively, capture them, send them to Azkaban... and then Voldemort would free them. An endless cycle of pointless battles."

Harry Potter and the Silent Guardian

Harry Potter and the Silent Guardian

Book&Literature · TalesByJaz

electrik
electrik
2 months ago
Replied to Vixdraconen

in the original books it's described as silvery-blonde and she supposedly emits a faint silvery glow in general, plus I think it's quite fitting here to emphasize her otherworldly looks given her quarter veela status instead of just calling her blonde

As Fleur entered the arena, the crowd hushed. The Welsh Green, with its smooth green scales, regarded her with reptilian curiosity. Fleur's silver hair gleamed in the sunlight, a stark contrast to the rocky terrain around her.

Harry Potter and the Silent Guardian

Harry Potter and the Silent Guardian

Book&Literature · TalesByJaz

electrik
electrik
2 months ago
Replied to SoulessReaper

what a rude and pointless comment

electrik
electrik
2 months ago
Commented

I really appreciate the daily releases, it's quickly become a habit for me to read the new chapter as the last thing before going to sleep. It's the perfect bite sized bit to relax with, thanks author

electrik
electrik
electrik
3 months ago
Commented

I was expecting more drama after how tense things had been between them at the Cullen's house

electrik
electrik
3 months ago
Posted

Splitting the character of Harry Potter into two, an elder brother with memories of a past life and the fictional world of HP and a younger filling the role of the Boy Who Lived, allows the author to write a unique and interesting alternate version of the canon while maintaining enough of the original storyline to keep it familiar. Further exploration of aspects of the wizarding world that were hardly touched in the original story add thought provoking background, while the strained relationships the MC has with many of the original's allies makes for compelling character development and exploration of the choices and values said characters had in the original story, questioning if they're really the infallible Good Guys that JKR presented them as. All in all, an interesting take on the world and story of Harry Potter that I'm eager to read more of.

electrik
electrik
3 months ago
Commented

thanks for the chapter, i'm so excited to finally see Alice and Robin interact!

electrik
electrik
3 months ago
Posted

compelling story, interesting characters, and thoughtful world building - even unfinished as it is, it's one of my favorites