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1 days ago
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I think you should clarify in the synopsis that though this is a harry potter story, he lost his magic at the start and therefore doesn't have magic. Because the idea of harry being in the military (SAS and stuff) is a good idea, but if you take away his magic then it's just a soldier. Personally taking away his magic just ruins it for me. I do have to say i haven't really read it, i started but just stopped because i really didn't like harry potter without magic. so if im wrong and he gets his magic back or something please let me know.

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999123bc
1 months ago
Posted

Great story, please update more. ....................................................................................................

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9 months ago
Posted

Pretty sure this is just a copy from The empire of New Valyria by LuciferKurosaki. It has like 40 chapters already at the archiveofourown site