Kevin_Moyer_5748

Kevin_Moyer_5748

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2022-04-28 加入 Global
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Kevin_Moyer_5748
Kevin_Moyer_5748
5 months ago
Commented

think there is an extra star. Just saying.

Kevin_Moyer_5748
Kevin_Moyer_5748
6 months ago
Replied to LeBronJames23

fair enough. they never seem to exist when they could really help with immersion.

But Su Yu had one hundred billion spiritual energy coins! There was nothing money couldn't solve.

Global Game: Ten Billion Spirit Energy Coins From The Start

Global Game: Ten Billion Spirit Energy Coins From The Start

Games · Dull Fireball

Kevin_Moyer_5748
Kevin_Moyer_5748
Kevin_Moyer_5748
6 months ago
Commented

um...did someone forget to imput the money amounts here?

"Ding, your bank card with the tail number 3831 has been credited with $0.00 and currently has a balance of $0.00."

GOD: I give you S-class stealing, and you use it to steal from me?

GOD: I give you S-class stealing, and you use it to steal from me?

Games · Daoisto7TQwQ

Kevin_Moyer_5748
Kevin_Moyer_5748
6 months ago
Commented

ok so I'm still trying to figure out if the copy/replica here is just a mistranslation of field boss or something else. it keeps coming up so it gradually got me confused.

"I instead have some hope that he won't be able to beat the replica ... tsk, I really want to see his expression after being brutally beaten."

GOD: I give you S-class stealing, and you use it to steal from me?

GOD: I give you S-class stealing, and you use it to steal from me?

Games · Daoisto7TQwQ

Kevin_Moyer_5748
Kevin_Moyer_5748
6 months ago
Commented

thought it was 10 billion. the novel title as well as the last chapter suggest such.

But Su Yu had one hundred billion spiritual energy coins! There was nothing money couldn't solve.

Global Game: Ten Billion Spirit Energy Coins From The Start

Global Game: Ten Billion Spirit Energy Coins From The Start

Games · Dull Fireball

Kevin_Moyer_5748
Kevin_Moyer_5748
7 months ago
Commented

is this oron?

Kevin_Moyer_5748
Kevin_Moyer_5748
7 months ago
Replied to GreatDaoofspace

ok no problem. I wish you all the best.[img=recommend]

Kevin_Moyer_5748
Kevin_Moyer_5748
7 months ago
Replied to GreatDaoofspace

not trying to sound offensive, but it looks like you could use an english editor or proof reader. I get that it is hard to find a good one, but it's just a thought. the only hiccups in your story look like either translation problems or grammar issues. otherwise your story is awesome and fun.

Kevin_Moyer_5748
Kevin_Moyer_5748
7 months ago
Commented

thought the plan was for Ent to fight the walking strawberry? here it says the cocoa bean.