My hobbies are procrastinating and overthinking things. I write for fun so feel free to share your thoughts and opinions on my works
2022-04-18 加入United States
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BottomOfTheBarrel
2 years ago
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I had a lot of hope for this novel but unfortunately, it has really fallen below my expectations. My problems are similar to other peoples but truthfully, I wouldn't even mind a simp mc or dense mc. honestly, it would probably be an improvement. My main problem is how toxic their relationship is. it starts off as a typical well written Isekai romcom between the mc and the villainess he wants to protect. A few dozen chapters in though, it devolves into two borderline psychopaths locked in a toxic codependency that is uncomfortable to read about. The main character and heroine repeatedly have inner monologues about how little everything else matters and how they don't care about anyone but each other. Heroine at one point almost kills a girl for trying to talk to the mc and the mc stops her. Then thanks her for holding back (she didn't, he held her back.) And afterwards, tries to shift the blame and punishment to himself. The story basically becomes a few paragraphs of fluffy rom com interactions between mc and heroine followed by a few paragraphs of one of them being deplorable to random other characters and the other accepting or justifying it. Maybe it gets better but I'd rather leave it up to the imagination than continue to suffer through their toxic and hard to read interactions. the author certainly has talent but the story just isn't there.
As an upcoming senior in high school, I thought my final year would be the same. A lonely year long bachelor party as I prepared for college. on the first day however, I awoke in a different world. Not only have gender roles reversed, but women have superpowers, and beauty standards are different. What kind of trope filled paradise did I wake up in.
deciding to forgo the path of my light novel predecessors, I will choose to live a fulfilling high school life free of shame or debauchery by focusing on forming friendships and genuine relationships. And my first step in my humble plan is, joining the pervert club?
Plenty of tropes and archetypes
Infrequent uploads (Work, school, and procrastination)
A healthy balance of plot and "plot" :)
No Ntr or R@pe (some cheating and sexual assault)
Similar to other Reverse World stories
I had a lot of hope for this novel but unfortunately, it has really fallen below my expectations. My problems are similar to other peoples but truthfully, I wouldn't even mind a simp mc or dense mc. honestly, it would probably be an improvement. My main problem is how toxic their relationship is. it starts off as a typical well written Isekai romcom between the mc and the villainess he wants to protect. A few dozen chapters in though, it devolves into two borderline psychopaths locked in a toxic codependency that is uncomfortable to read about. The main character and heroine repeatedly have inner monologues about how little everything else matters and how they don't care about anyone but each other. Heroine at one point almost kills a girl for trying to talk to the mc and the mc stops her. Then thanks her for holding back (she didn't, he held her back.) And afterwards, tries to shift the blame and punishment to himself. The story basically becomes a few paragraphs of fluffy rom com interactions between mc and heroine followed by a few paragraphs of one of them being deplorable to random other characters and the other accepting or justifying it. Maybe it gets better but I'd rather leave it up to the imagination than continue to suffer through their toxic and hard to read interactions. the author certainly has talent but the story just isn't there.
Reincarnated as the Villainess's attendant
Fantasy · Sound_Hammer