Shinai_Sunset

This doesn't even make any sense. They weren't the avengers's allies to begin with. They were tricked by hydra into joining up, but they never once allied with the avengers at this point. They haven't even met each other yet I think.

This seems to be more of a wish fulfillment fic than an actual serious fic.

"No construction happens here after dark" and "So we completed it in a single night" in the same sentence is... yeah.

Level 6 makes no sense unless they're fast tracking him for something. They would have likely copied the document on the target and culled the parts that he wouldn't need nor be allow to see with blackout. His greatest feats so far are dropping like 40 guys in one fight showing his marksmanship, and being good at gambling.

I get Stark and Hammer cause Stark is a party animal rn and Hammer is his "Rival", but Fisk is more likely to be doing actual work and philanthropy to cover up his mob boss business and Alexandra Reid is one of the five leaders of The Hand who are K'un-Lun martial artists that got banished for heresy. Fisk is a stretch cause he could be there to network, but Alexandra is not very likely to be there at all. Should have made some throwaway characters.

Didn't even realize this was a cambrian fic, I was just reading it cause it was an elden ring fanfic. Loved the story more than the "plot" surprisingly. Loved the little comedic bits where the tarnished does something bizarre, Loved when a plan or setup that has been coming for multiple chapters just clicks and makes you go "ohhhh, so that's why", Loved the little heartwarming interactions here and there, and I loved how the relationships progressed. 10/10 would read again.

Guys I think the author might have dropped it lol. its been years since the last upload.

PURPLE GUY

Like the Mc doom, not canon doom.