The_Nerd_5539

10 months ago

Posted

This novel is quite organize but lag any interesting event or situation.

World of Zelda

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The_Nerd_5539

10 months ago

Commented

I have to say your novel is quite organize the only thing I see that you had flawed with is that is lag any interesting event I can understand that you need to build your MC character and explain his situation first for most people but it will sometimes be boring .

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World of Zelda

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The_Nerd_5539

1 years ago

Posted

Could you please add more chapters Please..............................................................................................................................................................................................................