It was well written. There were a few sentences that stood out to me as awkward but other than that this is a well-written chapter. Keep up the good work, author.
EGGSCUSE ME
Then her eyes laid on her flat tummy. Or is it because of that?
Falling for his Prisoner
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Its a really well written book and has a lot of potential! The emotions, characters are all well written! Except the few typos and grammar errors, this book was a wonderful read for me
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typo
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isnt the fact already known?
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Wow this book totally caught me off guard. I really like the writing and the way the author describes the things. The plotline is interesting too. Looking forward to the upcoming chapters!
This novel is really well written! Good job author~ I added it to my collection! It has an interesting premise and is an easy read. I wish I could read all the chapters, but sadly I have to wait. I will be cheering you on!
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he...called her hun
use single quotes since double is for dialogue
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Hello I have removed this novel on webnovel as I would like to switch platforms. If you were a past reader please contact me at .xvi.ix. on discord to get access to the chapters. Thank you!1 Chs 46 收藏
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The Crone's Love
This novel is in dual POV. Two People. Two Eras. What will happen if they collide? Will they clash or form a bond unseen? Will there be another time, or will it just go through a cycle, repeating itself in a repetition of themselves? *** Everyone has heard of Crones in fantasy novels, haven't they? You know, those ancient ladies that pop up now and then giving mysterious messages to the protagonists when they need it. They have always facinated me. But... not enough to become one. Lillian Quill. That's my name. Or was, regretfully. I loved to read fantasy novels and escape from my reality. But I didn't expect the forsaken God to fulfil my wishes and reincarnate me into one of these novels. I am Lilith. The All-knowing Crone now, unfortunately. And what you are about to read, is my story. *** Albion De'Brounche. The notorious Casanova of London. Well, I was. Now, facing the wrath of God, I am "Eden." An unknown plebian. If you do not know the term, I am a commoner. Like you. Faced with a world of creatures, unexisting in Earth, I'm driven to absolute madness. Yes, a madness with you as the cure. Be that as it may, I am Eden. Whether I'm pleased with it or not. And you are about to read my journey in this horrendous world. Off you go to read, you don't want to lose my favour and deal with Lily now do you? Join my discord server~ https://discord.gg/hZVwTUM3aA **The cover art belongs to me8 Chs 10 收藏
I just finished reading the first season, it's a very good novel. I did not find any grammar flaws. Almost all areas of this work are excellent. Will definitely recommend this book. It has a unique plot, which as a writer I love. The author did a very good job. The only thing I found a little uncomfortable during reading was that, the author does a lot of telling instead of showing. Other than that this novel is really good.
I Awakened As A Writer!
Fantasy · CetusWritings