if you want to add new characters, don't use any name that comes to your mind. Instead, search it to make sure it's greek and read house dragon baleon the mighty. It's the best example. It can give you a clue how to write formal conversations that took place in ancient times and last but not least make sure to reread major events by different sources so there wouldn't be any problem
hey man, I have to say your novel is very unique well written but there is one big problem and that is using modern idiom in a historical novel or characters having too casual conversations or even names that are not Greek
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Two chapters today and no chapter tomorrow.
More than a Dragon Warrior
Movies · Emmanuel_Capricorn
dude, this Salazar we are talking about. He's so op that he can solo whole verse it's only natural that he is nerfd [img=disgusted]
After waking up, Slytherin fell into confusion after a brief period of joy: he didn't know what to do. According to the plan before sleeping, he only needs to wait for this body to grow into an adult before he can retrieve all his memories and restore his peak strength. But should he find something to do for himself during this time?
Return of Salazar Slytherin
Book&Literature · HornyFBI
it just an opinion, but you could've started the dance with baleon bringing dorne into the fold with a marriage, considering how stromlander and reach lords hate dornish. The dance would be 💯 guaranteed
a force named stupidity
Viserys exhales wearily, rising from his seat. "My decisions are not born of sentiment, Lyonel. They are guided by a different force entirely."
The Crab's Dance - A Celtigar's Tale [REUPLOAD]
TV · Giver_Of_Crabs_165
dude, are you serious?? Cyrus, the Great, was one of the greatest rulers of middle ages
Alexander the Great, Genghis Khan, Napolean Bonaparte, Julius Caesar, Cyrus etc. All of them were great conquerors who wanted to rule over the world.
More than a Dragon Warrior
Movies · Emmanuel_Capricorn
old or young humans have the potential to become corrupted when they tasted little bit of power
when are you going to drop the new chapter?? I can't wait anymore [img=update][img=update]
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original house baratheon
this is story of Robert baratheon true born son and his struggles to get what's rightfully his.( I'm not native speaker so there are going be some grammar issues so I hope you will bear with me)4 Chs 39 收藏
conquest of dorne you can work on this