I would love to read your new novel if the translation is better ... This is an awesome story and could be greater ... BUTA the translation is an embarrassment to us English people ... I was reading this to my husband and had to rewrite it on my other device so he could understand it ... It certainly is a great story when translated properly ... Sorry to seem so negative but please understand I am a professor of the English language spoken and written ...Also I have written many little stories for young children ....ANYWAY you are a good author you do put to much padding in though ..... I really like your story you have a great imagination
first line said thinking thrice before making her queen... Again past tense it should read think thrice
is it so hard to get it right NEPHEW . NIECE IS A GIRL... ZADE IS A BOY SO NEPHEW
sorry NEPHEW
Emily was shocked, she started crying. "I have a small boy, how could you do that to me? Even if you hated me so much, how could you send me away to the ruined pack? Arren is still your niece, don't you feel bad about him?"
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NEPHEW NIECE IS FEMALE AARON IS MALE SO NEOHEW ... Why can't you get the simplest of things correct
Emily was shocked, she started crying. "I have a small boy, how could you do that to me? Even if you hated me so much, how could you send me away to the ruined pack? Arren is still your niece, don't you feel bad about him?"
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so very sad... shame a lot of the sentences did not make sense ... Zen gave his all BUT Zander gave more to save his nephew ... If that was me and I saw the one I loved most in this world and my life I would have held on and gone with my daughter , who was killed by a drunk driver aged 14 years 10 months ,in 1992 .
I just tried going to the next chapter ,,, AND IT SAID THE END ... this is ridiculous as it's NOT anywhere finished
this whole paragraph does not make sense... don't put to or end words with ed .leave out there for this and other useless words ...I wish I could rewrite this entire story for you so that it made more sense .. The abuse of our English language is appalling ... As a speech and English literature professor this is upsetting .... This is a great story line exciting and leaves us wanting to read more ,BUT , it's not written properly .. Such a shame you are a talented group of authors , you just need a better translator who speaks proper English and knows how to put the sentences together proprerly...
"I will not be long, Pyro will create a portal and I will stay with him for a while before I returned with Celine, what is so hard about that?" Dawn looked at Pyro. "It doesn't a bother for you if you have to take one more people through the portal, right?"
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why was she wearing HIS .dress was he a cross dresser
"Okay." Aurel immediately took off his dress and changed with the new one.
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it's none of your business,...
"So, how many women you have been sleeping with?"
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