visionary_spe

dude, you just been repeating yourself from chapter one with no progress from mc

decide a gender, bit overall good chapter

sounds similar to way of the devil

nice but you get the names mixed up alot

this is it, the type of book I've been looking for

is he inside the egg or outside it's confusing

it's confusing

yet another good story sinks

it's a great story. Just a suggestion you should do time skips

please no hero complex