Ryuz3n

Maybe. They are somewhat overpowered to be honest, so I haven't decided how to or even if I want to deal with them. Ryumaku is fine but Galel energy and immortality it provides doesn't mesh well with rest of the world.

Aw man that's sweet. And not foreboding at all.

Hey, nice start. I was halway expecting Obito to keep meeting with the elderly in need of help one after another on his way to academy. There's not much else to say I guess so far but character feel real and considering the mind demon Obito is going to meet, the first scene is a good setup for that.

We are just getting started my friend

Oh, you noticed that? Well, I don't mind answering. Thing is, no one really seemed to be reading there, so I thought that posting there seemed kind of pointless. Even though uploading doesn't take much time, it was draining to do so. As for whether Kakuzu can copy Tenten's talent or not, answer is unfortunately negative. Apart from some specific ones [like it happened with Sora], Jiongu can't absorb kekkei genkais.

Right, no slaves. Absolutely. In fact, african- I mean, black market management team should put up a sign right at the entrance to clarify. With big letters - "There are definitely no slaves sold here. Especially not the elven ones." That should keep the medieval CIA at bay, I think.

Man, I love those dumb notes. Author-kun seems to enjoy making fun of his characters.

[Manipulation] - noun - controlling someone or something to your own advantage, often unfairly or dishonestly

It took me some time to notice, but... is Minori called Minori because she is small and looks like, well, a minor?