Daoistp64ZvU

2 months ago

Posted

Seems like an interesting start, though the dialogue, introdution and the tower fight are poorly constructed.

Asoiaf: Darth Jon

TV · Ninja_King_3834

Daoistp64ZvU

2 months ago

Commented

I likey

ch 0 2 Red Keep, Gerth, Kingslanding.

GOT: Chaotic Temptations

TV · AlwaysHigh

Daoistp64ZvU

2 months ago

Commented

Okay,,,

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Daoistp64ZvU

4 months ago

Posted

Pretty standard novel, some humorous places, otherwise entertaining.

Awakening the intelligence panel, the liver becomes a fairy

Eastern · THE_GUY

Daoistp64ZvU

5 months ago

Replied to Pumpkaboo

The award for "The most non review review" goes to...

This immortality? Cannot be cultivated anymore!

Eastern · Ye Henshui

Daoistp64ZvU

6 months ago

Commented

Ghosts, portraits, house elfes, wards if you know what I mean.

ch 130 Chapter 130: "Troll Attack Part - 2"

Harry Potter and the Silent Guardian

Book&Literature · TalesByJaz

Daoistp64ZvU

6 months ago

Commented

Gritted

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Legacy of Harry Potter

Book&Literature · Graviele

Daoistp64ZvU

7 months ago

Commented

Dobby for the win!

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HP: Harry Had Enough

Book&Literature · Galaxy_Wonder

Daoistp64ZvU

7 months ago

Posted

So far so good, shame this seems to be dropped though...

Harry Potter - Smut Fiction

Book&Literature · LemonZawodowiec

Daoistp64ZvU

7 months ago

Commented

Depends if you do not overdo character visualization.

Yes, more detailed.

HOTD- Family above All

Book&Literature · Vencha