You don't have to specify somethings like the speed limit or anything else... Some things people can figure out if you just point them in the right direction... Most of us on here have experience with hunters and all the power scaling shit
He could feel that they were still being followed as following a car that is driving at the speed of 60km/h is not a big deal for A and B-ranked Raiders.
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I see now... Try to summarize the long paragraphs author-him
Homecooked meals are the best and if ya disagree with me ... I can give you my addy and we can square up
'Yeah, this guy only ate fast food, but I want to eat homemade food, so what better than buying a unique cooking skill from the system?' Alex replied.
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Fantasy · Cosmic_Ceaser
I understand ... And if ya books gets better with time you'll have a hard time getting rid of me ... Imma be like a Koala bear on ya ass
It was in a previous chapter but I see you're slowly improving the language on here yuhh. . Love it
However, things were different for Alice as she understood that the person in front of her was not someone she could defeat alone, at least not alone. So, she tried clicking the secret button on her phone with her free hand only to get her phone taken by Alex, which made her helpless.
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Fantasy · Cosmic_Ceaser
And use everything in past tense man having present tense sentences in a third person past tense novel also takes away from the reading experience
I have fallen in love with the book... It is just that the sentence construction and repetition of words in a sentence with no punctuation marks and all takes away from the reading experience as having to figure out what you're trying to say while reading is not conducive to the reader as they came for a good time not a working time
Don't repeat words in a sentence brother man... It takes away from the reading experience
However, things were different for Alice as she understood that the person in front of her was not someone she could defeat alone, at least not alone. So, she tried clicking the secret button on her phone with her free hand only to get her phone taken by Alex, which made her helpless.
Primordial Soul's Rebirth
Fantasy · Cosmic_Ceaser
We gon see them again right ?
As I continued traveling through nothingness, I also saw some strange creatures moving around, completely ignoring my existence as if I was invisible to them and maybe I actually was, I don't know.
Primordial Soul's Rebirth
Fantasy · Cosmic_Ceaser
Additional info like the last part is of no use ... Breaks the 4th wall ... Don't want that happening too often now do we
Well, almost every S-rank raider is handsome or beautiful in their own right. Let's not talk about him being handsome as he would never be able to compare to Alex's looks.
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