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徽章 7

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4 months ago
Replied to javi299

that i can't change. But i have corrected the chap 12 wrong paragraph

"That would suffice as it would be 375 Karma points," ROB said.

Pokémon: The Journey of the Legendary Master

Pokémon: The Journey of the Legendary Master

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4 months ago
Replied to javi299

Bro I made a mistake in this paragraph sorry.

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4 months ago
Replied to BLITZ2

mc is already 16

"Delia," I whispered, my voice thick with emotion. "You know I like you very much."

Pokémon: The Journey of the Legendary Master

Pokémon: The Journey of the Legendary Master

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4 months ago
Replied to javi299

Do you want growth speed 100x. Bro, do you want the mc to become champion at 5th chapter of novel. Seriously, think first, dude.

"That would suffice as it would be 375 Karma points," ROB said.

Pokémon: The Journey of the Legendary Master

Pokémon: The Journey of the Legendary Master

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4 months ago
Replied to Ryujii

So why not? If i write everything unnecessary in the story will run at a very slow rate & which you are not going to like it.

I smiled wryly, wondering if Professor Oak was subtly setting me up for his granddaughter.

Pokémon: The Journey of the Legendary Master

Pokémon: The Journey of the Legendary Master

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4 months ago
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In this Pokémon world, polygamy is allowed. Aiden is super handsome, has a good personality, and has the potential to become a Pokémon master. However, his granddaughter has never shown any interest in men other than him

I smiled wryly, wondering if Professor Oak was subtly setting me up for his granddaughter.

Pokémon: The Journey of the Legendary Master

Pokémon: The Journey of the Legendary Master

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4 months ago
Replied to lex_rei

MC is already 16 i wrote in previous chapter . Age-16 compulsory for being trainer

"Ok, I decide the Pokémon world two months before the ash's journey beginning". 

Pokémon: The Journey of the Legendary Master

Pokémon: The Journey of the Legendary Master

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4 months ago
Replied to Aden_Harrison

Do you want the main character to be mentally sick like Sabrina in the TV series, always silent and giving mental commands?