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Moments 4
Kingoftimepass
Excellent story, excellent work, excellent character development, good language, using mythological characters, a new culture, seems like a good read :P
Kingoftimepass
Also FYI, if anybody is reading this review, this story's initial setting is across 14 universes (Loka in this story is equivalent to a universe)
Kingoftimepass
I thought about making them clear as we go along and importance of the respective thing came along. As for Yug (Yuga is a very long period of time and is equal to 4320000). Else the thing becomes too descriptive and just become a huge information dump. I will slowly explain them as we go along. Atleast that is current plan
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original He has descended
What happens when the one who trained all heroes, gets his wish at last _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ Are you tired with stories where the MC powers up w/o having to work or an MC falls into a lucky pit where he finds the most powerful object of all or a story where the MC is just a freaking genius loved by all good and hated by none or an MC who is good at all times and doesn't delve in the dark at all??? What he does is for the greater good or the results turn out good in the end. Then this story is for you Note: PS look past the term you dont understand (google them cause they are cool things), i do get into details of things as they become more relevant. I did not want to expand universe after every arc so i made an outer boundary and will slowly explain the setting and universe as we move along45 Chs 29 收藏
Hi, i have already started reducing the size of paragraphs, as for the information dump, i am just trying to paint a picture is all. I will try to shorten the description
He has descended
Fantasy · Kingoftimepass