yea mb
that's another aspect I'm trying to include but I'm struggling with like how to do without him seeming like an edgelord
Author's Note: End of Volume 1, I know it's been a little rocky and somewhat frustrating but this phase is almost over, just let me cook a bit more, little bit more.
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yeah volume 2 is the growth arc that's how I structured it
As he reached into his pocket for Eddy's letter, he hesitated, tucking it back away without opening it.
Marvel: Impregnation System
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god me too bro, I just want to do it right and not mess it up
Author's Note: End of Volume 1, I know it's been a little rocky and somewhat frustrating but this phase is almost over, just let me cook a bit more, little bit more.
Marvel: Impregnation System
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big plans for it in later chapters and I'm glad you noticed
The blood spear was then hurled back at Xarus with doubled strength, trailing a large cloud of dust in its wake.
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idk that's just how I structured the power
bro don't worry she'll eventually circle back around
yeah thanks man i really do care about my stories and I'm really just trying to improve and keep a lot of feedback to iron out the kinks in my writing
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A filthy, idiotic, hypocritical alcoholic degenerate, known to most as Ricky Freeman, died in a tragic car accident when his lower half was crushed by a drunk driver. Coughing out a bloody mourning for his balls, Ricky finally dies only to wake up in his next life. Reincarnated in the 1920s as a orphaned kid, how will he live in a universe filled to it's brim with cosmic beings- *DING* 'Huh?' [Congratulations Host for receiving the Impregnation System] ***Warning: I'm really messing around with this fic*** 4-5 Chaps a week75 Chs 8.9k 收藏
yea mb fixed it
Marvel: Impregnation System
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