Appreciated
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I was gliding through the chapters like a champ but then I realised I haven't plagued anyone's mind with my reviews. Cant't let that happen, can I?so first and foremost, The writing quality is good if you ignore the occasional grammatical error. I find her word choices a bit funny but that's how I like things so it isn't a deal breaker.As for the plot, it honestly isn't something you won't expect but also not something you can hit a guess and land a bulls eye. You can try tho.Now the pace of the story is quite good. It isn't going mach Jesus and also isn't rivaling a snail. Sweet spot I dare say.As for the giggles, I ship Lunar with Bernice.ah I forgot...the chapter word count is also quite nice so don't fret if you are a fast reader.
Check this paragraph, it needs a bit of editing but everything else is fine.
Says every girl
"You are such a hideous person, Father," I muttered.
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Indian dad spotted💀
"Get married so that your husband can save our family."
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He deserves it.
Nanny's voice trembled as she continued, "My lord has suffered a colossal setback in his business affairs."
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Stab the father and send him to the afterlife. Problem solved!
"You better, or I will have no place in the Balliol family," he said and walked past me.
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Keyword: Fantasy🥲
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