This will be a hit. The synopsis was luring us to read more. Grammer is no problem. As a fan who likes to read in this genre, finding new works is a never-ending saga. So of course, I am gonna keep this in my library and keep reading this. Let's see what will happen in the future.
im sure we'll get to meet him
"My home, my prison, I'm finished with the night." I felt the cool mist on my face as he spoke, and I realized he was summoning his coffin. He wasn't kidding about more control: I remembered when Luc couldn't move a pencil up and down the stairs, much less summon his coffin from wherever his father had been keeping him. "Come and protect me from the light."
The Fallen Rise
Fantasy · Yasmina_Iro
OOh things are getting spicy. I'll be honest the writing can be clunky at times, but i really do like where this is going. There is just enough spicness and worldbuilding to keep me interested
Oh my, this is surprisingly interesting! can't wait for the next update
i like her less and less
I frowned as I walked down the street, groaning with my annoyance as the house finally came into view. Just as I was hoping JInx would allow me to have the rest of the afternoon to myself, the witch seemed to insist that I pay for the annoyance by forcing me to go with her to the bank to settle both payments and help her prepare for the Inbetween. While I appreciated having money in my account, it was easily something she could do herself without me. Jinx knew how annoying it was for me to keep my wings pressed against my body for long periods of time, and it took all my effort not to slam the door open as I finally arrived.
The Fallen Rise
Fantasy · Yasmina_Iro