Congratulations! It seems you have got a contract. The story seems very promising. I admire the quality of the text. I don't see any major grammar or stylistic errors. That's rare here :D Well done and keep up the good work, author.
It's only a few chapters, but the story seems very promising. I like the plot and your characters. The quality of the text is also good, I don't see any major grammar or stylistic errors. Well done and keep up the good work, author.
I like the food, great music, the stories about pancakes, or cognac, and the places described, especially Paris <3 I think almost all of us can identify with the main lead. Who of us doesn't want to be perfect in something? Could we have more chapters, please?
Anemones is a great novel! Mr. Johnson is an interesting character, I mean is he a typical jerk, a male dressmaker swish, and deserved a lesson. Beautifully written! Well done! <3 <3 <3
“Guys, I have an idea for a few photos. We need to get to the Jardin des Tuileries as soon as possible. I want to take some pictures of the Eiffel Tower in the light of the setting sun.” Jo explained briefly.
The bet
Urban · Jo_J
Lastly, I waited so long for the new chapter... thanks, Author.
Golden hour
The bet
Urban · Jo_J
It looks like they are all worth each other
Jo and Patrick received a heavy blow. There were too many witnesses around them that didn’t know their roots so they couldn't use their family filth as any arguments as they could not bring his secrets to light.
The bet
Urban · Jo_J
The first few chaps are interesting.
Good story! Very good story! Very realistic! I like the food, great music, the stories about pancakes, or cognac, and places described, especially Paris <3 I think almost all of us can identify with the main lead. Who of us doesn't want to be perfect in something? Could we have more chapters, please? Do we have to wait for so long for updates?
Jo, you're right :D
The gods: unparalleled
Eastern · Bright Gabriel