Story is very interesting but full story story written like in one breath.You can leave some space when they are having a conversation.In the last chapter it nearly made me confuse if they were chatting or what.But overall It was a great work.Keep up Bro.
Story is very interesting but full story story written like in one breath.You can leave some space when they are having a conversation.In the last chapter it nearly made me confuse if they were chatting or what.But overall It was a great work.Keep up Bro.
Transmitted into novel with a modified plot - NTR'd- FANFIC
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