Thank you Young Master. It's really helpful. I thought I had deleted your comment, but here we are. Cause of power supply, my system has been down. My phone does not display this. I have taken note, and I am working on my development. You don't have to worry. Those two guys are not his true enemy like you've seen from the development so far, so he's not going to spend eternity fighting them.
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Read please, Chapters 21 to 24, you might have a change of heart
Seniors on the Path, Fellow Daoists, Holy Sons and Holy Maidens, Sect Seeds and Geniuses, Princes and Princesses, Junior Brothers and Sisters, and especially those Great Powers who are Hidden, This humble one would requests that you permit him to be shameless one more time in my trillions of trillions of years of lifespan. If you're looking for a fast-paced novel, it really is not fast-paced. If you're looking for a Weak-Strong MC, whose character and goal are being developed, then you're in the right place. We'll take you through the whole process. He'd slowly darken, because the hands manipulating in the dark are too many.
Okay, I get your point now. You have my thoughts. If you read chapters 23 and 24, you will know that he has started pretending now
Fellow Daoist, thank you for your review. I have taken note of what you said regarding the number of chapters written for Ye Chen and the others. I just want readers to understand that in the beginning, everyone is coming from a very neutral ground. They really have no enmity. But now, something is pushing Ye Chen against Jiang Hou. Later, Jiang Hou would also... However, the issue of revenge is not something that can be considered now. First, there's not enough reason to justify his actions. In the beginning, Jiang Hou was your typical innocent and simple person who was just Cultivating for the fun. But slowly, the world will reveal it's cruelty to him, as it's already doing. Put yourself in his shoes. You have an enemy who can destroy you in a moment if he so desires. You also have a grudge against someone less powerful than you, but the grudge has not developed into a life and death situation. Which one would be of concern to you? You may say, "But Ye Chen can become powerful all of a sudden, he is a genius". But I'll say, "Jiang Hou is more of a genius, and someone who is awakening from his slumber"
Fellow Daoist, thank you for your review. I have taken note of what you said regarding the number of chapters written for Ye Chen and the others. I just want readers to understand that in the beginning, everyone is coming from a very neutral ground. They really have no enmity. But now, something is pushing Ye Chen against Jiang Hou. Later, Jiang Hou would also... However, the issue of revenge is not something that can be considered now. First, there's not enough reason to justify his actions. In the beginning, Jiang Hou was your typical innocent and simple person who was just Cultivating for the fun. But slowly, the world will reveal it's cruelty to him, as it's already doing. Put yourself in his shoes. You have an enemy who can destroy you in a moment if he so desires. You also have a grudge against someone less powerful than you, but the grudge has not developed into a life and death situation. Which one would be of concern to you? You may say, "But Ye Chen can become powerful all of a sudden, he is a genius". But I'll say, "Jiang Hou is more of a genius, and someone who is awakening from his slumber"
it's ancienta cultivation world
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original True Villain of Chaos
Winner, they say, is the King, while the loser enters into oblivion. In this world, there are heroes and there are villains. What divides them is their values and interests. The hero kills a thousand, maybe ten thousand die because of him. In the end, he is praised for standing up for what he believes. The villain kills a hundred, and decisively so. In the end, he is despised for contradicting the hero. In reality, both the hero and the villain are two people who think differently from other people. They may have the same beginning, but their interpretation of values will lead to the ultimate conflict that will separate them forever. The final destination of Villains is ultimately DEATH. A TRUE VILLAIN MUST DIE. Some Villains are lucky enough to enter into Oblivion, they can be said to have had it easy. For they didn’t die, only their voice was taken away from them. Well, that’s not the case for our Protagonist. He does what he believes and believes what he does. He does not hesitate to enact the values he holds to be true. He is today ‘villainous’ and tomorrow ‘righteous. He is the True Villain.29 Chs 16 收藏
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Unfettered Soul
THE WORD says the Human heart is wicked, who can understand it? Greed, Lust, Pride, Fear, Disloyalty, Dishonesty, just for what the world has to offer. Whether consciously or subconsciously, each man wants to have things for himself and himself alone. Death makes us understand that all benefits last till death. At that time, the dead can't covet anything else the world has to offer. Only dirt and maggots are attracted to it. Lin Fan, the Young Master of the Lin Family of Blue Wind Village, had mediocre talent in cultivation but was lucky enough to meet the minimum requirements to enter the Outer Sect of Mystic Jade Sect as the most ordinary disciple of the sect. In two years, he was the only one who didn't advance to the Inner Sect amongst the disciples who entered the Sect at the same time. He was looked down upon and ridiculed, yet he remained indifferent but worked harder. Many were indignant that they were in the same sect as him and thus plotted against him. As it was forbidden for killing fellow disciples in the sect, they made a move on him during one of his Missions out of the sect. He was to obtain a certain herb from the Mountains to get a Realm Breakthrough Pill that helps those in Body Tempering Realm stage 6 to breakthrough to stage 7. While in the Mountains, just when he obtained the Herb by a cliff and planned to the sect, he was cornered, beaten to the point of death and thrown down the cliff. While in the air, a voice sounded in his mind: (Ding! System: ORIGIN, has been awakened. Spiritual energy will be absorbed to Heal Master's Body and Soul. A Barrier has been formed around Master to prevent him from falling to his death) The story of the Unfettered Immortal who does whatever he wishes, unrestrained and unmoved by the world's beauty or wealth.5 Chs 2 收藏
This is what DaoistRpvmde wrote earlier: ok firstly thank you for replying secondly the girl he live betrayed him and she was making him as a joke is that's not a situation to take an action to take revenge to show them what he can do The most thing that will make him less noticeable is for the powerful people to see him running after those who insulted him and eliminating them. This will make them know that he is still the same person and did not suspect anything. Secondly, I hope that if you want to keep these two alive for 10 chapters or something, I hope that you do not exaggerate in making them strong and do not show them in many chapters because I feel disgusted by these forms and their frequent appearance or exaggeration in their development will make me leave the novel even though I liked it and I liked the hero and I liked the idea of developing the element of evil within him to reach the rank of the greatest villain ..and thank u and month i will try to give u the golden card
True Villain of Chaos
Eastern · Unfettered_Soul