yay chap 300
Nice co-
oh accidentally posted it before I was done: but most people won't even think about reading it after they see how you wrote it.
okay so just some things I find weird, how short the chapters are which is caused by the way you wrote this, this is more like someone describing a story they read a year ago. If ya wanna write it like this then do.
I would recommend not using emojis, if you want then do but it drives people away.
maybe just reincarnated, you really have to find some gems in the sewage tho
Well it's probably good It's just not my kind of novel, maybe I'll read it someday, but today i won't.
Well, i think that this novel is actually pretty good, I've read all the current chapters (12) and i like them. This novel is inspired by "The Legendary mechanic", though only in big events and character traits, but if you like "the legendary mechanic" or any novel like THM I'd recommend reading this novel as well, also the matrix part is only for the start and some small events (currently) also the online part is there, only thing to suggest it's a game is a small glitch and a system (currently). Well I'll recommend this if you like THM, video game novels and some good old crafting novels.
I love fanfics about games that don't have many fanfics about them and rimworld is a really good game, ya did it again anti, love ya fanfics.
The RimWorlder's Tale in a Xianxia World
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