NeroUmu

NeroUmu

male LV 4

Boredom is my disease and reading is (sometimes) my cure

2021-08-08 加入 Canada
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徽章 6

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NeroUmu
NeroUmu
2 months ago
Replied to Songolikesapples

We all have made that mistake. It’s no issue.

Unfortunately, the Magical World didn't subscribe to the same morals or logic as the 20th century. As far as my knowledge of the subject showed, House Elves needed to be bonded to Wizards or Magical locations to live. Their slavery was a terrible, systemic side-effect of that.

The Grind (And Helping Heather Potter) [Book 2]

The Grind (And Helping Heather Potter) [Book 2]

Book&Literature · Daddy

NeroUmu
NeroUmu
2 months ago
Replied to Songolikesapples

20th century is 1900-1999.

Unfortunately, the Magical World didn't subscribe to the same morals or logic as the 20th century. As far as my knowledge of the subject showed, House Elves needed to be bonded to Wizards or Magical locations to live. Their slavery was a terrible, systemic side-effect of that.

The Grind (And Helping Heather Potter) [Book 2]

The Grind (And Helping Heather Potter) [Book 2]

Book&Literature · Daddy

NeroUmu
NeroUmu
3 months ago
Replied to Zerox4575

TLDR: I would need to rewrite the whole story and do a lot of research/planning in order to even start let alone become satisfied with the end product. I understand your perspective. However something like that would take a lot more research. Delving into legends and comic territory in order to get enough information to become confident since I have little faith in creating species and/or lore that would befaithful to the original content of Star Wars. Since any non-colonized system that would give the mc a decent start would have to be within the unknown regions. Regardless of all of these factors I would have to come up with decent character arcs (which will take awhile since I’ll need notes/spreadsheets/planning in order to execute to my satisfaction) and just regular arcs in general to the point I will probably just rewrite the whole story and I don’t have the time for that at the moment as school is starting back up.

NeroUmu
NeroUmu
3 months ago
Replied to Zerox4575

I am open to writing more of this fic but my standards lately have gotten pretty high when it comes to writing and my ability to write the things I want to write is just not up to par

NeroUmu
NeroUmu
6 months ago
Commented

Thanks for the chapter

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NeroUmu
NeroUmu
6 months ago
Replied to InterPlanarGod

It’s a problem for quite a few of these chapters actually. Some of them only have the problem halfway through as well. I recommend checking through all current chapters

NeroUmu
NeroUmu
6 months ago
Commented

One big paragraph. Hard to read. Pls fix

NeroUmu
NeroUmu
6 months ago
Replied to Briar_Rose1385

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Weyland-Yutani in the spacefaring human age created androids. Humanoid robots with synthetic flesh and blood. An AI installed meant to replicate human behavior. They only managed to achieve AIs that were mere imitations, and never succeeded in making them fully "human". The AI will assist me in having androids that can blend in. I just need to tune the AI listen and think independently to a controlled degree. I don't need it to be very powerful. What I am interested in are the combat androids seen in the AVP games. That is what I'll be making. They will provide planetary security. They will look and act human. This way, it will be hard to suspect their true nature. Then I'll move on to infiltrator models. The androids will be my hands and feet. All the while, I will stay a ghost, a spirit, a spectre, the unseen hunter.

Predator of Star Wars: Hunt(old)

Predator of Star Wars: Hunt(old)

Movies · GoldDragonMachina

NeroUmu
NeroUmu
6 months ago
Replied to SleepingDragons

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"Good work, but watch your movements! You could've finished it off in one move, but you used three. The rock, the slash, and the finisher. This wasted precious energy that could've been used in other situations…"

In Danmachi with Plasmids

In Danmachi with Plasmids

Anime & Comics · Abadom

NeroUmu
NeroUmu
7 months ago
Replied to Awcher

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They could conjure illusions, transform themselves, and could even conjure blue flames known as foxfire.

To be the strongest

To be the strongest

Anime & Comics · LaughingSnowFox

  • Star Wars: Vanguard Corps (Halo, Titanfall, Warhammer, Eve Online etc) original

    Star Wars: Vanguard Corps (Halo, Titanfall, Warhammer, Eve Online etc)

    Movies ACTION ROMANCE SYSTEM HAREM OVERPOWERED KINGDOMBUILDING FASTPACED STARWARS

    A man wakes up, some stuff happens, he gets a fleet, some training, scratch that, a lot of training and then goes into the stars wars universe before the blockade of Naboo by about three years. The rest is history. Also, he brought a few A.I. for the ride. Crackfic. Also not a great writer so bare with me here. If you have some constructive criticism please tell me, it would be greatly appreciated.

    4 Chs 698 收藏

  • Return of the Almighty original

    Return of the Almighty

    Urban ROMANCE REINCARNATION HAREM SLICEOFLIFE GENIUS CAMPUS YURI

    Not all tags are set in stone, might change some later. Also had to keep it as Male leading so I could use the tags I wanted A man who has lived through countless hardships for thousands of years has finally reached the pinnacle. With nothing left to do and absolute boredom eating at his very soul, he decides to return to his home planet as himself the year he is born and start a new life again. Except this time he felt the need to live as a woman because "why not?" First off, yes this is a genderbend story that is based in the real world with some real-world events happening. Second, a lot of the stuff that happens I will be pulling out of my a*s as I am way too lazy to figure out how stuff actually works as I am only a student so if you have any knowledge on how things actually work please lmk. Finally, there will be some references to anime and the like and even some characters directly based upon anime characters (ie: I might base a character off of saber from fate) so please keep that in mind. Please do leave feedback as I would love to get some in order to improve. Thank you!

    9 Chs 222 收藏

  • A Shinigami in MHA original

    A Shinigami in MHA

    Anime & Comics ACTION ROMANCE MAGIC HAREM SUPERPOWERS OVERPOWERED GENIUS KILLER MHA

    Dying of an unknown cause, a young man wakes up surrounded by nothing but darkness. For what seemed like hundreds, maybe thousands of years there was nothing but the young man, until... You read the story to find out Okay first off, I know next to nothing about the MHA world other than stuff I came across in fanfics. Now I will do some minor research on the subject but not much. I just had an idea pop into my head for the world and decided to write it. Also, no my novel is not dropped. I will still be uploading chapters. Only my OC's belong to me. Everything else belongs to their respective owners

    4 Chs 241 收藏

  • Don't know what to call it yet original

    Don't know what to call it yet

    Anime & Comics ACTION REINCARNATION MAGIC HAREM OVERPOWERED ISEKAI

    Some of the tags are still unknown to me if they will actually be used and some tags that arent there might actually be used so take it lightly. This is a wish-fulfillment and I have no idea if I will properly attempt to create a FF or drop it pretty early. I am also open to criticism on how to improve and grammar corrections if you spot them because it will help a lot. First off I know very little about the worlds I'm sending the MC to and most of my knowledge for a lot of the worlds is based on Fanfics. Second, I have no idea if this will be a multiverse so that is also up in the air. Third, I am horrible at portraying a character's emotions and will probably make any romance (if there is any) very bad and might just straight-up change some character's personalities entirely to fit my needs. If you don't like any of this then please move on. Finally, any and all characters except OC's are not mine. Worlds are also not mine. First world is Danmachi

    4 Chs 77 收藏