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zenkedo
zenkedo
6 months ago
Commented

I liked this story. But honestly, the decision is in your hands. If you feel like writing this is worth it (no matter how cringe it might seem to you or others) then go ahead.

zenkedo
zenkedo
8 months ago
Commented

Ren, you handsome devil, stop making people blush! 😂

zenkedo
zenkedo
zenkedo
1 years ago
Commented

This one turned out well. Good job. And thanks for the chapter.

zenkedo
zenkedo
1 years ago
Commented

Caribert is not that big. I clicked through it within an hour. You'll be fine

zenkedo
zenkedo
1 years ago
Commented

I get it that the exposition is important but it's a bit of a let down when you come for a chapter and find a filler. Especially in a work this good. But, you gotta do what you gotta do. Keep up the good work.

zenkedo
zenkedo
1 years ago
Commented

This whole paragraph reeks of Senator Armstrong for me.

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The older student became enraged at the accusation, "Well, I HAD TO DO SOMETHING! All I wanted was to build a better world, where everyone is equal. You've seen it, haven't you? How the muggleborns are still considered peasants, and how little room they have to rise in our society. I want to give them opportunities to start their own families, their own crests. I wanted to create a society without any good or evil, only power."

Enchanting Melodies (HP SI)

Enchanting Melodies (HP SI)

Book&Literature · athass_prkr

zenkedo
zenkedo
zenkedo
1 years ago
Commented

You like to see scenes go this hard. Thanks for the chapter.

zenkedo
zenkedo
1 years ago
Posted

This is a plagiarized work. Please, report it. It's not only of poorer quality, it's also makes the og author's life harder. SO I once again ask you to report this and go on with your day, knowing that you did something good.

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