Adithya_B

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Adithya_B
5 months ago
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yes sir

- Eagle (golden eagle, it's a very common eagle but looks really cool anyway. The eagle of Kassandra (greek player character in AC:Odyssey, co-founder of the 'Hidden Ones' I believe, which would become the brotherhood) named Ikaros is a golden eagle)

A third son of prophecy (Harry Potter AU / Assassin's Creed lore)

A third son of prophecy (Harry Potter AU / Assassin's Creed lore)

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Adithya_B
Adithya_B
5 months ago
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nice, thanks for the update

Adithya_B
Adithya_B
5 months ago
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well done,please follow this style with more dialogues.thank you for the chapter

Adithya_B
Adithya_B
5 months ago
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ingvlid leaviathan, tobio ikuse, valerie tepes, jeanne de arc , kuisha abaddon , laviana reni ,bova tanin

Adithya_B
Adithya_B
5 months ago
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many of the lines were a epeat from previous chapter. hope you can fix it

Adithya_B
Adithya_B
5 months ago
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kuisha abaddon, kuroka, poison ivy, Diana prince can also be options. You can introduce them with Greek origins rather than mixing with dc

Adithya_B
Adithya_B
5 months ago
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can you add Laviana reni, tobio ikuse,incrinate anthem into the peerage

Adithya_B
Adithya_B
5 months ago
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it's a good work and I am not badmouthung . I just hope that you could do more to explain the real situation and do less philosophical writing as too much is also boring

Adithya_B
Adithya_B
5 months ago
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can you leave some substance in the writing .like more dialogues or his inner thoughts .You are skipping important information and background

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