Weary_Engineer

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Weary_Engineer
Weary_Engineer
4 months ago
Commented

they are all talking as if they knew Rui was not in kandria last 4 years. Did fake Rui not visit his mother on her death bed? would this not be suspicious?

Weary_Engineer
Weary_Engineer
7 months ago
Commented

you are telling me that Rui did not even look at who his potential opponents could be? Is he that arrogant?

Weary_Engineer
Weary_Engineer
7 months ago
Commented

well if he was going to gamble why not make him forfeit the throne war too. this would be more equal and certain in case someone of the 75 percent dies.

"Not an offer," A grin appeared on Rui's face. "A gamble. A gamble where he stands to gain my forfeit of the bid for the throne, and I stand to gain Minister Kramen. Yes, this is the only way to gain Minister Kramen's official support without wasting time or necessarily compromising anything."

The Martial Unity

The Martial Unity

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Weary_Engineer
Weary_Engineer
7 months ago
Commented

is that even possible? to see 300 km away. Atmosphere would not be transparent enough to let them see right?

"Is that it…?" Rui narrowed his eyes as he spotted a structure on top of a mountain three hundred kilometers away from them.

The Martial Unity

The Martial Unity

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Weary_Engineer
Weary_Engineer
10 months ago
Replied to DropZ

I also think like that. Right now, the reason he can not use the death sympaty during combat is it requires for him to know his opponents natural frequencies. If he can somehow measure them out during combat which is not that unprobable, he can kill groups of senior level left and right like they are normal people.

Weary_Engineer
Weary_Engineer
10 months ago
Replied to Epic_Buddie123

Thanks for your support.

Weary_Engineer
Weary_Engineer
10 months ago
Replied to LaziestMan

I will check it out. Thanks.

Weary_Engineer
Weary_Engineer
1 years ago
Replied to Epic_Buddie123

Thank you for you review. As you can see in first three chapters, we see the background of modern world and consequently our MC. These three chapter will draw the boundries of the power of our MC. I will mostly stick to these boundries.For example, our MC is a scientist specilizes on ai and implant chips. On other areas he will at most be above average. I will not make him beat a martial Master just because he happened to master modern boxing at some time in his original world. Actually this is one of the things I don't like the most. An author should not add random capabilities to the MC just for the story's sake. However, your suggestion does not require me to break the background of the MC. I can add flashbacks so that we can learn about him in a more subtle way. I will try.

Weary_Engineer
Weary_Engineer
1 years ago
Posted

Hello, I am the author of this novel. I am an engineer and always liked novels with magical settings. However, It is hard to find novels with a belivable plot and I decided to write a novel myself. In this novel I am going to try to write a story with a logical plot and characters. Please write reviews. As I am a new writer, I need lots of feedback. Thank you.

  • Paving My Way With Science In This Magical Universe original

    Paving My Way With Science In This Magical Universe

    Sci-fi ROMANCE REINCARNATION MAGIC TRANSMIGRATION GENIUS KINGDOMBUILDING ADVANCEDTECHNOLOGY INTERSTELLAR

    In the 22nd century, a scientist who dedicated his life to AI and analog microprocessors decided to spend more time with his wife after completing his project. However, a terrorist attack claimed the lives of him, his wife, and his AI friend. Born anew as a baby, he discovers himself in a universe filled with magic, where people use it in a primitive manner. He is confident that with just a bit of research, he can enhance the use of magic in this new world. However, his sole objective is to find his wife. To achieve this, he must grow stronger. With a scientific approach, he uses magic to make guns, computers, and AI. Will he succeed in reuniting with his wife in the end? If you dislike: An MC acts like a teenager, An MC wanders from fight to fight suicidally, Numerous unexplainable coincidences, A universe akin to Matryoshka dolls (There is always an upper realm, right?) People possessing an absurd amount of power (eg. demigods, true gods, amazing gods, or whatever) then this novel is to your liking. Note: Although this is technically a Sci-Fi novel, it incorporates elements of the magic and fantasy genres. And because this novel`s power system does not provide exponential growth to the MC, he will not be able to always grow stronger individually. He will have to make his country better with his knowledge. So kingdom building, advanced technology, and interstellar will have a substantial effect on the plot.

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