Ffs every.single.time
"I would like to join the Black Bulls." I said.
Black Clover Rebirth
Anime & Comics · RJTStories
There is so little details in this book. How about your vertical and horizontal administrative divisions? Except for mentioning provinces theres nothing else
In some cases, Marcus had to intervene personally, sending his shadow agents to ensure that particularly defiant landowners complied with the new laws. Through the use of subtle genjutsu, he manipulated the minds of those who resisted, instilling in them a sense of duty and loyalty to the empire. These interventions were rare but effective, and soon the edict was being followed across the empire.
Rebirth of Rome
Others · cookieowl
????? Wasnt rome established like a few months max a few years ago. Again, chatgpt style work
One evening, as Marcus sat in the shadow of a quiet alley, he overheard a group of young men talking in hushed tones. They spoke of their ancestors who had fought against Rome, of the strength and honor of Praeneste's warriors. There was a sense of nostalgia in their words, a longing for the days before Rome's dominance.
Rebirth of Rome
Others · cookieowl
Its so annoying that there are literally 0 details
The crossbows, steel armor, and weapons became the backbone of Marcus's military. His army grew in size and strength, and with each passing year, they became more and more capable of defending the city and expanding its influence.
Rebirth of Rome
Others · cookieowl
Microscopes need glass. How did he develop a sustainable glass industry. This is impossible.
Each hospital was equipped with wards for different ailments, surgical theaters for more advanced procedures, and laboratories for research. Marcus made sure that the hospitals were accessible to all, not just the wealthy, ensuring that every citizen could receive the care they needed. The hospitals also served as training grounds for the next generation of doctors, who were taught to use microscopes, develop new treatments, and understand the principles of hygiene and public health.
Rebirth of Rome
Others · cookieowl
You still havent introduced the tribes size (neither the armys size)
He taught a group of trusted individuals, those who showed aptitude for numbers, how to keep detailed accounts and conduct audits to ensure that resources were being used wisely. It was a system that brought order to the village's growing complexity. No longer was their economy based solely on barter and verbal agreements. There was now a system of checks and balances in place, and Marcus's new administrators were soon overseeing everything from trade with neighboring villages to the distribution of food and supplies.
Rebirth of Rome
Others · cookieowl
Tbh for a great empire, rome isnt a perfect capital city. For an empire centered around the mediterranian, sure, but for the rest of the world, its geographical location is only limiting. Id say itd have to be somewhere around the current Frankfurt or Paris area or anything in between like luxembourg but luxembourg is too hilly to create a big city (for european dominance)
Tomorrow, he would start teaching the hunters how to build more than just huts and traps. He would train them to be warriors, better than anything this world had ever seen. He'd give them weapons that would make them superior to any tribe in the region, and slowly, he would expand their influence, establishing a central force to rival what the world would one day know as Rome.
Rebirth of Rome
Others · cookieowl
I mean alright but this is basically a no brainer op mc. Like zero challenge. If he wants to assassinate anyone he can, he can destroy armies by himself, he is immortal and can control minds. And as a bonus he has physical enhancements and his abilities will never be a burden on him (infinite chakra)
The body he had now was familiar in some ways and utterly different in others. He had the strength and durability of the Uzumaki, the vitality of the Senju, and the immense chakra of the Ten-Tails. His mind buzzed with possibilities as he tested his limits, summoning a sliver of chakra to his fingertips. Blue energy crackled at his command, raw and potent. He clenched his fist, feeling the immense power at his disposal. For a moment, the enormity of his new situation sunk in. No longer bound by the frailty of human limitations, he had become something… more. He had been given the tools to shape history in ways even the mightiest emperors could only dream of.
Rebirth of Rome
Others · cookieowl
Westeros.... is in the west
As they began to chain and disarm the captives and receive the mercenaries who had served with Lothar against the Dothraki, Lothar looked to the east.
Blood And Iron (ASOIAF/GoT)
TV · Chill_ean_GUY
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original Ideas for Books and Settings
Some of my ideas for books, settings, world systems and other things that might be useful for your books that I wish to share.14 Chs 9 收藏
Sympathy seems out of place when hes planning to kill off kids
That's good news. Tyrion was one of the few people in this world for whom Light had genuine sympathy.
Yagami Light in Game of Thrones
Book&Literature · FanFictionPremium