Puppet_i0p

Puppet_i0p

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just a guy who comments for fun.

2021-05-12 加入 Global
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徽章 11

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Puppet_i0p
Puppet_i0p
3 days ago
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foreshadowing??

After the initial effects fade, the consumers mana core was die. It would stop them from ever using magic again, and for someone like Azel it was effectively a death sentence. Picking them with great care, Azel placed the flowers in a small brown pouch hanging on his waist.

A Zombie's Path to Power

A Zombie's Path to Power

Fantasy · A_depresso

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Puppet_i0p
1 months ago
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1 months ago
Posted

I think the novel has a lot of potential. The plot and world building seems to be unique and the characters are all thought out and have multiple layers to them and I hope the writer keeps it that way. The main issue would be the occasional punctuation/spelling mistake but that is a quick fix.

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Puppet_i0p
1 years ago
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was kinda expecting her to say "we fight."

"You're right. The best course of action would be to stay away from the Carapace Demon for now and hide when it decides to land."

Shadow Slave

Shadow Slave

Fantasy · Guiltythree

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1 years ago
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[... received a Memory: Silver Bell.]

Shadow Slave

Shadow Slave

Fantasy · Guiltythree

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Puppet_i0p
1 years ago
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"These berries are called Bloodbane. They grow in the places where human blood was spilled. That's why there's always a lot of them along the slave trade routes."

Shadow Slave

Shadow Slave

Fantasy · Guiltythree

Puppet_i0p
Puppet_i0p
1 years ago
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Huh? I didn't know this came with Privileges! This is an amazing one. Praise the Sun!

The Protagonist’s Sister Is Actually The Strongest

The Protagonist’s Sister Is Actually The Strongest

Fantasy · PancakesWitch

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1 years ago
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Puppet_i0p
1 years ago
Replied to UNDated

pretty sure a black hole the size of a coin is capable of destroying a large country

It can also make things be crushed under their own gravitational pull... that one seems dangerous. I could do a lot of damage with that spell, so lets stay away from it for now. Also, couldn't I theoretically create a black hole like that? Only a very temporary one, like less than a second. I don't know where you could get the mass to create a stable one.

The World's Shift

The World's Shift

Fantasy · Xubx

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Puppet_i0p
1 years ago
Commented

short chapter today so i could put some emphasis on the power system in this world, might go into more detail later though

  • I am the Calamity original

    I am the Calamity

    Fantasy MAGIC MYSTERY SUPERPOWERS VILLAIN DEVIL APOCALYPSE KILLER ABANDONED

    In the year 3023, humanity was wiped out by a catastrophic event that left the world barren and desolate. For eight hundred years, the earth remained uninhabited, and nature took over, reclaiming the land that once belonged to humans. But deep in the ruins of what used to be a great city, a small group of people survived. They had managed to build a community and, over time, developed a unique way of surviving in this new world.

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