~swish~ (Cold breeze noises)
Fantasy · Calm_Mountains
I think the novel has a lot of potential. The plot and world building seems to be unique and the characters are all thought out and have multiple layers to them and I hope the writer keeps it that way. The main issue would be the occasional punctuation/spelling mistake but that is a quick fix.
was kinda expecting her to say "we fight."
"You're right. The best course of action would be to stay away from the Carapace Demon for now and hide when it decides to land."
Fantasy · Guiltythree
[... received a Memory: Silver Bell.]
Fantasy · Guiltythree
"These berries are called Bloodbane. They grow in the places where human blood was spilled. That's why there's always a lot of them along the slave trade routes."
Fantasy · Guiltythree
Huh? I didn't know this came with Privileges! This is an amazing one. Praise the Sun!
Fantasy · PancakesWitch
All praise the sun!
Fantasy · PancakesWitch
pretty sure a black hole the size of a coin is capable of destroying a large country
It can also make things be crushed under their own gravitational pull... that one seems dangerous. I could do a lot of damage with that spell, so lets stay away from it for now. Also, couldn't I theoretically create a black hole like that? Only a very temporary one, like less than a second. I don't know where you could get the mass to create a stable one.
Fantasy · Xubx
short chapter today so i could put some emphasis on the power system in this world, might go into more detail later though
foreshadowing??
After the initial effects fade, the consumers mana core was die. It would stop them from ever using magic again, and for someone like Azel it was effectively a death sentence. Picking them with great care, Azel placed the flowers in a small brown pouch hanging on his waist.
A Zombie's Path to Power
Fantasy · A_depresso