ok so what does rebirth have to do with this so far. it ok I guess, I kept wanting for something to happen but I now just feel mislead by the title
I Am now more inclined to drop all of your stories, because in my mind you're just going to drop them in the middle anyway. why get invested.
more please. I know that I am not the only one waiting hoping for more of this great novel. I know you have other projects and enjoy them as well, but this is the novel that lead me to you as a writer.
sorry I just can't. it's just to unbelievable. that four year old would be running around doing these things and every adult in the area is like "yeah this is ok". I mean really? even hinting at flirting? kinda gross there. I don't care how old you made this character soul, that body is of a four year old.
great story. well written. MC is good. side character's are likable. Though it starts off as a common trop, plot flows nicely and evolves in to its own story. very few grammar mistakes. waiting for more. 😀😀😀😀
new name is great can we get a new chapter to go long with it
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can we have a new chapter, please. this is a really good story.
think this would be a much better story if there was more actual story. maybe the author should write an accompanying cookbook or maybe rethink whether or not they're actually trying to write a story or a cookbook. I keep hoping that maybe the next chapter might get on with the story, but I am very doubtful.
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