Thanks.
- Hello, - in the empty space in front of Shichika there was a woman with burgundy hair braided in two buns at the back of her head. Two demonic wings protruded from her back, and a red stone glowed between her massive breasts. She was 1.76m tall and wore black plate armor.
Non est Deus( Danmachi fanfic)
Anime & Comics · Justlucky
My mistake. Everything should be correct now.
Thank you, such comments are much more valuable than many people think. English is not my native language, and the lessons I received was not the best, to put it mildly. Over time, the situation has improved, but it cannot be called good. Such moments are also connected with the fact that in my language some phrases make sense. I will try to fix it in future.
You're right. I missed a couple of words while writing. Thanks to you, It`s fixed now.
I can't say for sure. I think I'll give it a try.
- I'm Lyd, a lizardman warrior, the gargoyle's name is Gros, the arachne is Ranye, and the siren you saved is Ray, we're also very pleased to meet you.If you don't mind, as an apology for our behavior, we would like to invite you to dinner. I will introduce the rest in our camp.
Non est Deus( Danmachi fanfic)
Anime & Comics · Justlucky
- Is it just me or does he see us? - the gargoyle, consisting of an ashen-colored stone, whispered to the red lizardman.
Non est Deus( Danmachi fanfic)
Anime & Comics · Justlucky
The monster girl had golden feathers with blue tips, currently covered in blood. Her clothing consisted of two strips of fabric covering her chest, similar to amazoness clothing. The lower part of the body was covered with blue feathers arranged in the form of a skirt.
Non est Deus( Danmachi fanfic)
Anime & Comics · Justlucky
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original Non est Deus( Danmachi fanfic)
A strange boy who sees something deeply hidden in people, who owns the strongest sword style without a sword, arrives in the labyrinth city with the goal of finding his master. But the intended fate changes when divine blood touches the child's body. Seven mysterious creatures make a bet that directly affects the life of a child. From this moment his story begins. Events of this fanfic begins 9 years before the main story, a little later after Ais joined the Loki familia. I do not own the characters or plot of Danmachi or Katananagatari. I only claim ownership of the OC and the plot associated with them. I took the picture from Google Image, if it belongs to you and you don’t want it to appear on the cover of my work, please let me know.24 Chs 355 收藏
- original
Don't lose your smile (Danmachi x bloodborn)
After the death of his family in an accident, a lonely teenager in search of strength and a new friends goes to the labyrinth city of Orario. After a series of unfortunate events and stupid decisions, Crowley finds himself in a completely unfamiliar and frightening world. Oh yes, and something also damaged his hunter's mark, so his path will be much more difficult than expected. _______________________________________ English is my second language, and in my native language I have never written anything resembling a complete work. I write fanfiction to improve my English and writing skills in general. Please be understanding. (I am still open to constructive criticism on any points). _______________________________________ And of course, I do not own danmachi or bloodborn, as well as the original characters for the works.(Found the cover on Google images, if this causes any problems please contact me). I consider only the plot of this particular fanfic and OC to be mine.39 Chs 276 收藏
I made a mistake while looking for new words, and then made a mistake again by inserting the uncorrected version a second time. Thanks for your help in finding it.
Non est Deus( Danmachi fanfic)
Anime & Comics · Justlucky