inoe_lisa

inoe_lisa

female LV 2

where the wind blows,imagination follows.

2021-08-06 加入 Uganda
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inoe_lisa
inoe_lisa
2 years ago
Posted

Wow, author. Lovely book. What a twist to life! Very exciting plot though it would be better with better grammar. I know an editor who can help you out with that. Contact me if you are considering this option. but otherwise, nice book

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inoe_lisa
inoe_lisa
2 years ago
Posted

A wonderfully done piece! Applaud for the author. With a well thought of plot, the novel proceeds on steadily with no hiccups along the way. nice work.

inoe_lisa
inoe_lisa
2 years ago
Posted

Sky, what the heck is in your head? Whatever it is, keep it there. Encore for another job well done. Love the twist and tinge of dark romance. Surely a new favorite. Keep up the good work Sky

inoe_lisa
inoe_lisa
2 years ago
Replied to FB_Heelz

well, thanks for the feed back. It's a little confusing, I apologize. Well, it's a draft . I hadn't realized that I had published but let me finish editing and rewriting and you will get it in it's better form. Also, thanks for the support. You'll get a mention 😉

inoe_lisa
inoe_lisa
2 years ago
Commented

better phrasing needed

inoe_lisa
inoe_lisa
2 years ago
Commented

could have been phrased better

inoe_lisa
inoe_lisa
2 years ago
Posted

Loving the creativity of the author! What an interesting way to open our minds! Truly intriguing and mind capturing. The first chapter says it all. Good job author

inoe_lisa
inoe_lisa
2 years ago
Commented

Lovely first chapter. Really had me hoping for more. It's not your usual cliche start so, applause for you author/translator

inoe_lisa
inoe_lisa
2 years ago
Replied to colourful_ercy

thanks

inoe_lisa
inoe_lisa
2 years ago
Replied to Glimmy

thanks lots

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