A wonderfully done piece! Applaud for the author. With a well thought of plot, the novel proceeds on steadily with no hiccups along the way. nice work.
Sky, what the heck is in your head? Whatever it is, keep it there. Encore for another job well done. Love the twist and tinge of dark romance. Surely a new favorite. Keep up the good work Sky
well, thanks for the feed back. It's a little confusing, I apologize. Well, it's a draft . I hadn't realized that I had published but let me finish editing and rewriting and you will get it in it's better form. Also, thanks for the support. You'll get a mention 😉
better phrasing needed
could have been phrased better
Loving the creativity of the author! What an interesting way to open our minds! Truly intriguing and mind capturing. The first chapter says it all. Good job author
Lovely first chapter. Really had me hoping for more. It's not your usual cliche start so, applause for you author/translator
thanks lots
Wow, author. Lovely book. What a twist to life! Very exciting plot though it would be better with better grammar. I know an editor who can help you out with that. Contact me if you are considering this option. but otherwise, nice book