Nico_Leztier

First, I'd like to say how the opener reminded me of Interstallar or 2001: Space Odessy. that was something I didn't expect. Second, I'd like if there were more actions in between the characters talking, so it is more natural and not just a back and forth. actions are a good way to show emotions. Third, I loved the descriptions they have a lot of care behind them, but I think the descriptions took away from my previous point. but each author has their style. overall, I enjoyed this sort entry into this new world and hope to read more. Good luck to the author, and thank you for reading this. keep up the hard work!

the story is good overall, if you want something classic I highly recommend it. the author put a lot of time into this book, and it's clear. Just needs more substance in the world building department. 10/10 will continue to read, and good luck to the author.

The characters and story are very well put together, shout out to the great author of this story. 10/10 best story I've read in a while.

I love how descriptive and vivid the story is. You can really tell the author put a lot of work into it. I hope the Author continues this amazing story, I will continue to support it.

let's be honest, this story is made by a great author! I may be a bit biased because I am Nico, I'm very honored to be the inspiration behind this character. keep working hard toward your dream! I'll keep supporting you all the way!

Also sorry I didn't see this sooner! Life has been crazy lately, I'll get back to writing soon enough.

in The Normal Universe, Earth that is. Yes! In Xenoverse or The Dragon Ball Universe He's a Halfbreed like Gohan!