Shameless review on author behalf. Aware of my shortcomings in raw literature and will continue to improve.
Sounds like something I’d do
OI! I know stuff happens but this story is an absolute masterpiece in the making bro! Can't wait to see chapter 49 one of these days. I'll be waiting!
I heard a voice in my head speaking to me. Although slightly muffled, I could make out what they were saying. It wasn't anyone's voice in particular. Just a voice. Regardless, they sounded desperate. Perhaps it was my mother calling out to me to wake up, as I had a habit of sleeping in, especially on the weekends.
Fantasy · Cloki
I've only gotten a bit into chapter two but it seems to be a well designed series. The design detail and multitude of different locations mentioned makes it seem like you've take a lot of time designing the world. Good job, I like the writing.
I like the mysterious vibe to it. The way Zane doesn't react to much makes him seem a little separated from the other side characters which could be good or bad.
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Hera: I'd say that's a when more than an if.
Fantasy · Frosty_Mo
Thanks, much appreciated
Wow, that was very deep. I honestly like the interesting take on the subject and think this story could be quite interesting.
All in all I enjoyed the read. Still catching up with most recent chapters but from what I see this series has a lot of potential. I’m particularly interested in the world building!
Caffeine: Omniscient Gal
History · Kulkuljator