Frosty_Mo

Frosty_Mo

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Frosty_Mo
Frosty_Mo
1 years ago
Posted

All in all I enjoyed the read. Still catching up with most recent chapters but from what I see this series has a lot of potential. I’m particularly interested in the world building!

Frosty_Mo
Frosty_Mo
1 years ago
Posted

Shameless review on author behalf. Aware of my shortcomings in raw literature and will continue to improve.

Frosty_Mo
Frosty_Mo
1 years ago
Replied to ultrabash5

Sounds like something I’d do

Frosty_Mo
Frosty_Mo
2 years ago
Commented

OI! I know stuff happens but this story is an absolute masterpiece in the making bro! Can't wait to see chapter 49 one of these days. I'll be waiting!

I heard a voice in my head speaking to me. Although slightly muffled, I could make out what they were saying. It wasn't anyone's voice in particular. Just a voice. Regardless, they sounded desperate. Perhaps it was my mother calling out to me to wake up, as I had a habit of sleeping in, especially on the weekends.

Re: Hero Camp!

Re: Hero Camp!

Fantasy · Cloki

Frosty_Mo
Frosty_Mo
3 years ago
Posted

I've only gotten a bit into chapter two but it seems to be a well designed series. The design detail and multitude of different locations mentioned makes it seem like you've take a lot of time designing the world. Good job, I like the writing.

Frosty_Mo
Frosty_Mo
3 years ago
Commented

I like the mysterious vibe to it. The way Zane doesn't react to much makes him seem a little separated from the other side characters which could be good or bad.

Frosty_Mo
Frosty_Mo
3 years ago
Replied to Yvcme

Agreed

Frosty_Mo
Frosty_Mo
3 years ago
Replied to ultrabash5

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Hera: I'd say that's a when more than an if.

The Leviathan: Malice's Return

The Leviathan: Malice's Return

Fantasy · Frosty_Mo

Frosty_Mo
Frosty_Mo
3 years ago
Replied to Amit_Parekh_2971

Thanks, much appreciated

Frosty_Mo
Frosty_Mo
3 years ago
Commented

Wow, that was very deep. I honestly like the interesting take on the subject and think this story could be quite interesting.

  • Restarting original

    Restarting

    Fantasy DARK

    I keep dying over and over. I've died in some of the worst ways possible but why, why do they want me so badly? Why do they have to involve everyone else in their insane delusions? In mine? Cover art credit: https://www.zerochan.net/1810353 Email: b.yournotmydad@gmail.com. Ignore the name. Email me if you have any questions or if hate mail is your thing.

    21 Chs 20 收藏

  • Returning Home original

    Returning Home

    Anime & Comics ACTION REINCARNATION COMEDY DARK SURVIVAL ISEKAI THESTRONGACTINGWEAK

    Tsuki Izumi awakens to the orange clouds of evening in Lugnica. All he sees is a beautiful sky accompanied by a rather unpleasant odor. Deciding to head home, Izumi sits up expecting to see trees and brush around him but is instead greeted with small, poorly kept up houses and a dirt road. "What the-" "Hey! What are you doing in front of my house?!" A young girl with blonde hair and crimson eyes grabbed his shoulder and gave him an unpleasant glare. "Well? I asked you a question. Why are sleeping in front of my house?"

    4 Chs 4 收藏

  • The Leviathan And His Sons original

    The Leviathan And His Sons

    Fantasy ACTION ADVENTURE ROMANCE COMEDY MAGIC WEAKTOSTRONG DARK TRAGEDY

    If none of these roads takes you down the path you seek, then simply carve a new one in the boundless forest. Surely you'll make it through. . .

    3 Chs 3 收藏

  • The Leviathan: Malice's Return original

    The Leviathan: Malice's Return

    Fantasy ACTION MAGIC DARK MULTIPLELEADS

    Aiya looks down at the rock and sees that the symbol has grown in brightness. Thinking nothing of it, she drops the rock and gets up to run back but just as she begins to move a blinding light erupts from behind her consuming the surrounding area with Pink and Golden flames. Cover Art Credit: Wallpapertip.com Feel free to email me with questions or if hate mail is ur thing idk.

    50 Chs 15 收藏