Tumelo566

Tumelo566

male LV 3

you know, the usual.

2021-03-19 加入 Global
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Tumelo566
Tumelo566
3 days ago
Replied to OriontheGreat

[img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

Jacob felt a little hurt after hearing that. Do you have any idea how hard he trains to absorb mana and fill his dantian and Hope is JUST full of mana. This is unjust. Very Unjust.

I am in legacies

I am in legacies

Book&Literature · Tumelo566

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Tumelo566
10 days ago
Replied to Daoist9vQkph

they can use it but not so much create black magic.

Is safe to say no other creatures except the human race can create black magic. And once it is created, like enegy, can not be destroyed. just like a certain father of someone who's name rhymes with Kirby.

I am in legacies

I am in legacies

Book&Literature · Tumelo566

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Tumelo566
1 months ago
Replied to Listless_Nomad

yap, 1.5 time better than an average human

[Physique: Level 1 (1.5 times stronger than a normal human adult)

I am in legacies

I am in legacies

Book&Literature · Tumelo566

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Tumelo566
1 months ago
Replied to Foosh

[img=proud]

before the words were finished his foot stepped on the wire connecting to a somewhat big globe of light and the next thing he sees is darkness.

I am in legacies

I am in legacies

Book&Literature · Tumelo566

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Tumelo566
11 months ago
Replied to Vidhan_Bhardwaj

I see. thanks, I'll do some adjustments to my writing!![img=strong][img=Feeling it]

That being said, Jacob could see how sad Penelope is, how sad she must have been the past years, the bitterness in her eyes and the mockery lingering in her charming voice. He couldn't help but feel sorry for her. and was a little angry at Dr Saltzman for doing whatever he did. He felt the urge to go and interrogate Dr saltzman. But then again, he wasn't there, he didn't know what happened and the reason behind his actions so the best he could do presently was to comfort Penelope ( of course he wished he could comfort through mouth to mouth but Penelope would burn his fucken Lips off )

I am in legacies

I am in legacies

Book&Literature · Tumelo566

Tumelo566
Tumelo566
11 months ago
Replied to

so childish story telling is better, atleast for fanfic?!

That being said, Jacob could see how sad Penelope is, how sad she must have been the past years, the bitterness in her eyes and the mockery lingering in her charming voice. He couldn't help but feel sorry for her. and was a little angry at Dr Saltzman for doing whatever he did. He felt the urge to go and interrogate Dr saltzman. But then again, he wasn't there, he didn't know what happened and the reason behind his actions so the best he could do presently was to comfort Penelope ( of course he wished he could comfort through mouth to mouth but Penelope would burn his fucken Lips off )

I am in legacies

I am in legacies

Book&Literature · Tumelo566

Tumelo566
Tumelo566
11 months ago
Replied to create_end

I am using AI to rewrite my paragraphs in a "better" english. I am bad at English and my story telling is very basic and childish. (or so I thought)

That being said, Jacob could see how sad Penelope is, how sad she must have been the past years, the bitterness in her eyes and the mockery lingering in her charming voice. He couldn't help but feel sorry for her. and was a little angry at Dr Saltzman for doing whatever he did. He felt the urge to go and interrogate Dr saltzman. But then again, he wasn't there, he didn't know what happened and the reason behind his actions so the best he could do presently was to comfort Penelope ( of course he wished he could comfort through mouth to mouth but Penelope would burn his fucken Lips off )

I am in legacies

I am in legacies

Book&Literature · Tumelo566

Tumelo566
Tumelo566
11 months ago
Replied to Elokla

@Elokla. You are a bloody Genius!!This could not only help with that but also help with refining it. [img=strong]

Tumelo566
Tumelo566
11 months ago
Replied to TrueMonarch00

Sorry sorry, I'm still dealing with some issues, I'll resume around 20 something.

Tumelo566
Tumelo566
1 years ago
Replied to D_Weissman

not really no ,but we can't just ignore that Hope has already started falling for Landon, and we know how determined Hope is. her just dumping Landon for mc isn't her style.

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    I am in legacies

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    a brilliant engineer dies in our world but the HIM in alternative world gets his memories and some perks. what will the new improved him do in this world?!. NOTE* this is my first time writing, so be lenient and let me know what you think. i also do not own anything besides my MC and some characters i will introduce later, and also some new plots in future. this is gonna be like a long novel. hope you're ready

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