Kathy_Fullenkamp_4894

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Kathy_Fullenkamp_4894
3 years ago
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I am enjoying the storey line. The grammar is good. Grammar errors very irritating. I find the father son relationship humorous

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Kathy_Fullenkamp_4894
3 years ago
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Translations is very good. Attempted to use the audio but the female voice was irritating. I suggest you get some one to read that is fluent in English. Punctuation would help if the person reading knows how to read English. The story is written well. The story very good.