Then why ask for a source if u don't want to watch the source?
fixed now- was busy and forgot 🥲
I didn't notice this mistake or comment ;-;. will fix it when I am able to, thx a lot 😁
thanks a lot for helping me with that- this one was a simple spelling error that I miss looked.But with the silent letters part I didn't know about (or forgot xD). If you find any other errors then please let me know for help in the future. The only problem currently is if I fix these grammer errors the comments on them disappear. So unsure if I should fix this one or not(someone else can find your comment useful too)
Alvar opened the first book while the second one was floating by his side. He was flipping through the book, page after page until he reached a new clean page. He took out a fancy golden fountain pen and all he wrote was an l and closed the book. Letting it disappear into his storage magic.
Is it wrong to take a break in Danmachi? (Rework)
Anime & Comics · TheMetaCheese
will be explained next chapter :D
'I am getting ahead of myself. I need to get ready for the Denatus first. I need to create a few of those badges for the Denatus. That should be enough to bypass the requirements of joining the Denatus from what drunken Loki told me.'
Is it wrong to take a break in Danmachi? (Rework)
Anime & Comics · TheMetaCheese
i deleted the Im back chapter so that's why
Pandora's Box symbol
(Pandora's Box symbol)
Is it wrong to take a break in Danmachi? (Rework)
Anime & Comics · TheMetaCheese
Cant say for sure, but I think 100 chapters or less. But I will quite possibly explore the entire world of danmachi outside of Orario in this book so maybe longer.
Author here, I couldn't find any errors but might be wrong, if you find any then pls tell me. I am using a mixture of Grammarly and Chatgpt for grammar fixing and grammar only so hope it helps.
Is it wrong to take a break in Danmachi? (Rework)
Anime & Comics · TheMetaCheese
happy to be back 😀
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original Is it wrong to take a break in Danmachi? (Rework)
Alvar, after saving his world from the chaos that engulfed it, made a kingdom for all the different races left in the world to rest in peace and harmony. But after a few generations, he started to feel empty and bored. Deciding that his time as the king has come to an end. He decided to leave his world full of good and bad memories and live a new life in a different world. =============================================== A/N This is a rework of the previous ff of the same name, I wanted to try again and change a few things and see if it might be better than the previous one. The MC is op, so this book would be more on the slice-of-life side of things, and I'll be focusing more on the research side of things and trying to uncover things etc. English isn't my first language so do correct some of the mistakes I make!16 Chs 824 收藏
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Is it wrong to take a break in Danmachi?
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Alvar has finished his goal by protecting his world from its evil and succeeded in building a kingdom to help the races live in harmony. Still, after living for so long and working on his kingdom he wished to retire, so he picked his most trusted friends and taught them how to lead the kingdom and look after it in his stead. Afterward, Alvar with the help of his magic, items and elementals traveled to a different world to rest and complete his promise. =============================================== A/N This is the first time I wrote a ff so any suggestions and criticism are welcome so that I can improve. Also, I don't own anything but my OCs and I am mainly using Danmatchi as a template so I might change things like some monsters or characters and so on. English isn't my first language so do correct some of the mistakes I make!28 Chs 4k 收藏
it might be late to say this- but this ff's writer don't use anything to discern thoughts and speaking. Sometimes it is specified that they are thinking other times you have to discern yourself if they talk or not. In this case he is thinking to himself.
"If you combine my age in my previous life and this one, I'm older than my father."
Journey Of Zoro In Another World
Anime & Comics · Fumiaki