Great start and character building. Looking forward to more
Seems like a great start. I like the story development
Interesting plot so far. Hopefully the story develops beautifully in the subsequent chapters
It seems the author is really prejudiced against Indians.
It was hard to not keep reading what is happening next. A beautiful love story and an amazingly beautiful adventurous fantasy. Great character development and writing by ashknight. My favorite author
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 This chapter is too good. Men are deformed 😂😂😂 Simply brilliant
Calhoun doent mince words haha
Haha. calhoun doesnt mince words.
"Does your aunt favour Madeline more than you?" Calhoun gave a look of pity to her, "I believe your words can be convincing just the way you wrote the letter and handed it to Mr. Heathcliff. I will leave it in your capable hands," saying this, he went on his way to hear Beth's heart rate increase out of fear.
Fantasy · ash_knight17
Adrian and Ethan’s names are reversed
Daddy! Come Home for Dinner!
General · As If Dawn