Matt_Hardesty

lances had a year to gain strength.. seems like he didn't gain anything.. smh.

I feel like it skipped ahead to fast.. I don't know lances strength...[img=thinking] ty for the ch.

ty for the ch buddy!!

so come together and make a city? seems the next logical choice. 1 city to defend instead of 3.. also where's the mcs strength gain at? I thought there was growth but we haven't learned what's yet. also I would have sent an embassies to the elves they do know for info..

has he continued to work on his limits.. we need some kind of character sheet explaining his strengths and accomplishments. have the made mounts? did he gain a pet? skills need listed. has his magic increased? don't jump to far ahead of his developments. as always ty for the ch!!

I would have healed her wound immediately. a scratch from a demon isn't something I'd think was minimal..

hey author double check your pronouns she is becoming he alot... ty for the ch.

where's the new ch....

now they're dressing him and he goes with it weak!!! I would have made what I wanted and to hell with their opinions. so pissed I'm stick reading this damn book.

wtf this is turning into a girl's wet dream of a book... oh he does my chores oh he brings me food oh he gives me free clothes.. blah. I got excited when he started combat classes but that went away quickly.. where is his actual build up of character... he's just support.. dumb.