The main character is very unique and fun to follow along with. The story's pace and writing quality are both top-notch love it! The author has established the world background quite well as well.
Love the Harry Potter element, it adds spice to this story. I can't wait for more updates on this amazing piece. You did a great job with the pace of the story development even though it only has 8 chapters.
This has a very interesting world that I can see develop into something big. The usage of short syntax was a bit too often in the first chapter but it did succeed in building the suspense. Other than that it's fabulous, can't wait for future updates!
The story development is very well-paced. The medical element embedded adds to the mysteriousness of the story. I can't wait for what is about to happen in future chapters!
Thank you for your review I will work hard on that!
Thank you for the review and constructive critisim will work harder on that!
Thank you so much for the review I will do my best to improve!
You have an amazing MC who is very unique and a strong character. Your writing quality is very nice and story development is steady. Keep up with the hard work!
I have not much to say, this was amazing, absolutely breathtaking novel. The prologue with a small play on mind was a great introduction that really hooked me in!
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original To Fall Faster than a Romance Novel
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“Where might you think you're going? I told you, wing length is the maximum distance you can be from me.” - A Science lab conducting illegal human embryo engineering creates what could be the most beautiful but deadliest beings on Earth. Humans with animal features such as ears, wings, tails, gills, forced to work as a government agent. Etoile discovers the lab while paying a visit deep in the dumpsters for her latest News report. Through a skyline incident, she is mistaken by a cold, possessive and attractive agent as a spy of another country. Tsuki was one of the first generations of successful subjects, the winged male. His cold and handsome face, vermillion eyes, along with his distant and dominating characteristic that does not match with his cute name. She’s stuck with him. Forever…and he won’t let go. - "You're a demon with angel wings!" *slightly long chapters at the start* ranging from 1500-2000 words. I do not own cover art if there are any copyright issues please contact me.7 Chs 20 收藏
Btw it's hilarious XD
Larry Bottem and the Sorcerer's Scone
Fantasy · Jake_Aroling