world building is really good the story is well paced and interesting to read
yes please leave comments on how you think I can improve. much appreciated
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
nope sorry I just looked back ma rong won this from the auction
"I hope we can do it," Ma Rong said as she stared at the seed in her hands. This was the seed to the Yin Gathering tree. It was a very hard seed to find, and even harder to grow.
Games · Snoring_Panda
didn't the fat merchant get this?
"I hope we can do it," Ma Rong said as she stared at the seed in her hands. This was the seed to the Yin Gathering tree. It was a very hard seed to find, and even harder to grow.
Games · Snoring_Panda
Good trial read it is pretty well-written
can't lie read this as Win city 😂
Ming looked at the messages that were being controlled again and frowned. W city was too far from him. Even if he wanted to go, he wouldn't dare. The journey was long and who knows what he might encounter. He chose to ignore it.
Urban · FETI
git gud
memoirs of deaths
Fantasy · Green_wolf_newb