Adwaid_Nambiar

This is a big improvement from when I read this story the last time. The pacing is flawless, not too fast and not too slow. The characters are better fleshed out and dialogues feel natural. This story showcases the kind of pressure that a lot of Indian teenagers face when studying abroad. And how sometimes it's just outright stupid. The bond between the friends is well fleshed out. It was a enjoyable read, anyone looking to read a good slife-of-life novel should definitely try this one out.

I have to express my admiration for this piece of work. The story's beginning is intriguing, with minimal exposition, allowing readers to form their own ideas about its direction. Anastasia and Emily are both appealing characters, although Emily is my personal favorite. While the world-building unfolds gradually, it is multi-layered, which sustains the reader's curiosity. The dialogue is excellently crafted, and it appears natural. As I am only on the sixteenth chapter, I am already having a delightful time reading it and eagerly anticipate how the story unfolds. Great job and keep up the good work! 👍🏻

Although I'm not particularly fond of romance novels, this one managed to captivate my interest. I was pleasantly surprised by the way the story unfolded and the portrayal of the protagonist. It's safe to say that this novel goes beyond the typical romance genre and delves into various themes that are handled with skill. One thing that stood out to me was how the novel challenges the morality of the characters' actions without making excuses for them. This aspect of the novel was particularly thought-provoking. Overall, the story was well-crafted, and I am eager to read more chapters since there are currently only a few available.

Thank you for your honest feedback! I've received similar criticism in the past and I understand that my unconventional writing style may not be for everyone. However, my intention was to create a cinematic experience for the reader, which is why I use a script-like writing style. As a thriller, I strive for a fast-paced and information-dense story, which is why I avoid excessive descriptions and encourage readers to interpret the scene for themselves. I am aware that some readers prefer more clarity in character dialogue and emotions, and while I don't plan on changing my format completely, I will try to incorporate your feedback. Thank you for taking the time to read my novel and for your support! ❤️

In my opinion, writing a fantasy novel can be challenging as it's easy to unconsciously mimic other works. Therefore, it was refreshing to read something different. I enjoyed the way the author introduced the main character and how the character was written. Although there are a few mistakes, they don't significantly affect the reading experience. The author's world-building is impressive and deserves appreciation. The pacing is good, although some may find it too fast. I liked the story and will probably keep on reading. Good job👍🏻

Undoubtedly, this piece of work boasts a remarkable atmosphere that makes you feel the room and the overall tone of the place thanks to the author's excellent descriptions. The writer skilfully creates tension when needed and a sense of calmness when the plot thickens, making the pacing spot-on. The story of Kai and Sia is intriguing, and I am eagerly anticipating where it will lead. Honestly, I cannot find any criticism to give as the story is well-written as well as engaging, and is still at it's early phases with less chapters. I won't reveal too much about the story's elements to preserve the readers' experience, but I am personally impressed by the quality of this work and am looking forward to reading more chapters.