That was hard to read. This book is trash.
A good story has Lead characters that you can really want to support and root for. This story does not have that.
I hate how this story is written. I want her to be a strong FL who paves her own way and her own path. She's just going to listen to him??
Exactly! So true! This isn't love. And how can I cheer on a guy like this?
What a creep! Why are we glorifying a man child that can't regulate his emotions and now this? I don't think he can be redeemed.
🤣🤣🤣🤣 God, this is so stupid! Now I really am done. She hates killing but she loves it, & they only kill people who has "hurt everything." Alright. This story needs to be thrown in the trash and then re-written with a real editor. This is one of the worst, if not THE worst things I have ever read on this app.
Cora by the way is a secret agent. She takes information about my target and I'm the one doing the killing. In short, we're partners. We belong in the FIN Association. We only kill people with bad backgrounds that threatened everything. We're not like other assassins who only kill not knowing the reason. We kill because we have a reason.
Fighting Mate
Fantasy · Monachre
"So does I" What does that even mean???
"So does I." I said emotionless. I don't want to be involved around him.
Fighting Mate
Fantasy · Monachre
This is one of the WORST things that I have ever read on here!!!! I wrote better stories when I was 10 years old! Now I know for sure, Webnovel will let anyone write a story on here. Yes, it needs an editor. The grammar is horrific. The english is bad. But that's not the only thing wrong. Even if the English was perfect, it is written so terribly! It's not just a language issue. Every other sentence is practically an example. The dialogue is unrealistic & just awful! I mean it. I wrote better when I was ten. The author needs to take this down, pay to have it looked at by an editor that speaks English & is experienced, and try again. I'm so disappointed! Author: Be grateful I'm writing this here instead of leaving you a bad, one star review. I suspect that your writing is terrible, even in your native language. Do better.
Okay, I'm out. I'm so tired of these Chinese drama stories that take years to finish, have 700+ pages, ridiculous storylines, the couple can go over 100+ chapters without talking after a breakup (which is a waste of money) etc. There are good stories on this app and this sounds like all of the generic ones that aren't.
She was originally the number one killer in the apocalypse which made zombies tremble in fear. An accident happened when her superpower was upgraded.
The Ghost King’s Wife is Sassy and Beautiful
General · Peach Three Branches
I was hoping that someone other than me was thinking this!! You did not disappoint!
"Why are you the way you are," it wasn't a question.
Letters to Romeo.
Fantasy · ash_knight17