Interesting story. Some of the grammar is a bit off and it rattles me a bit out of my zone when I subconciously correct it. Sorry, force of habit. You should consider working with a proofreader. Great job.
Urban · PandaEatingPeanut
Interesting story. Some of the grammar is a bit off and it rattles me a bit out of my zone when I subconciously correct it. Sorry, force of habit. You should consider working with a proofreader. Great job.
Days Of Future's Past
Urban · PandaEatingPeanut